Con tus manos

May 29, 2007 15:58

Con tus manos
870 // PG
for may 08 07.
This is sort of a companion piece to Turn of the Century. Last night, joyfacedown bribed me to write this fic. She wanted at least 800 words for this prompt involving Jon, Spencer, and palm reading by Wednesday. The title is Spanish for "With Your Hands"; I chose a Spanish title because joyfacedown's first language is Spanish, and ( Read more... )

may 08 07

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lady_of_sadness May 29 2007, 22:39:11 UTC
oh ok, so this line?

Jon pretends to inspect Spencer’s palms, then slides his hands over Spencer’s. “I think our life lines match.”

may have made me turn to a big ol pile of mush. cause really, that is the perfect thing to say right there, and it's jon walker, of course it's perfect, it's perfectly jon and just... yes.

i love this. it's schmoopy without being sickening, just sweet enough without going overboard. really nice.

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sweetrecovery June 1 2007, 02:31:20 UTC
Aw, thanks. I think it's sickeningly schmoopy (great word, by the way), but it's Jon and Spencer and I really couldn't help myself.

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packmentality May 29 2007, 23:48:59 UTC
Oh wow, me gusta. This is beautiful.

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sweetrecovery June 1 2007, 02:33:54 UTC
Thank you.

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bluefuzzyelf May 30 2007, 02:40:55 UTC
Good lord. The last line? Made me melt. I am a big pile of goopyness with googly eyes staring at you in adoration. This was unbearably sweet and I loved it.

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sweetrecovery June 1 2007, 02:34:29 UTC
Thank you. :)

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joyfacedown May 30 2007, 21:35:19 UTC
aw, ¡yo tambien te quiero!
This is absolutely perfect and you know it.

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sweetrecovery June 1 2007, 02:35:56 UTC
I know it. Thank you for making me write this.

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sweetrecovery June 4 2007, 02:55:27 UTC
Thank you! I love that everyone loves the last line; it just came out spontaneously and I was worried it was too cute (even for this story).

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