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May 12, 2007 20:08

Darkness Upon Your Door
512 words / PG / Ryan&Spencer

My mom's not coming back. )

may 08 07

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bruisesonguitar May 13 2007, 07:28:56 UTC
My heart started hurting even before I clicked the cut tag. And then I cried because I know what track you are talking about.

This was so painful and effective.

God you are clever coming up with this. Wow. Really excellent fic. *mems*

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cheshireempress May 14 2007, 01:50:25 UTC
Oh wow, this is the kind of feedback I live for. Thank you so much!

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givesyouhell May 13 2007, 07:51:18 UTC
I really liked this. So simple and heartbreaking. Also, yay for Savage Garden references! The idea of baby Ryan Ross singing along to Break Me Shake me is amazing.

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cheshireempress May 14 2007, 01:52:40 UTC
That just might be my favourite mental image of Ryan EVER, out of everything I've ever imagined him doing. *grins* Thank you for the awesome feedback.

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rock_my_town May 13 2007, 22:53:04 UTC
yes...I loved this. We need more of this.

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cheshireempress May 14 2007, 01:55:06 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I haven't written any more of this story specifically, but it kind of fits with two pieces that I wrote before this. They're in my journal under the "rps" tag if you're interested. :-)

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bestthingaround May 17 2007, 04:46:44 UTC
wonderful and heartbreaking little scene. very well done.

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cheshireempress May 20 2007, 03:18:26 UTC
Thank you. :-)

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eleanor_lavish May 19 2007, 19:32:02 UTC
Oh! My heart! This is the reason I love Spencer and Ryan, this history, this knowing each other so well and always being there, even when they don't say anything. Lovely!

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cheshireempress May 20 2007, 03:21:48 UTC
I love writing their dynamic; it's so much fun to play with. I love trying to find new ways for them to communicate. Thank you for commenting!

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