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yetunknown in we_are_cities

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Jun 15, 2010 14:28

throw all the songs we know
(~400 words) // this was done on the fly and unbeta'ed so don't say I didn't warn you
for prompt 5 june 10.

( the total quantity of matter and energy available in the universe is a fixed amount and never any more or less )

fandom: bandom, help: the gulf, fan: fic, 5 june 10

Comments 6

heartequals June 15 2010, 17:12:05 UTC

Oh, this is gorgeous.

yetunknown June 16 2010, 11:29:57 UTC

thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

takkatakkatakka June 15 2010, 21:14:31 UTC

She was spread out from the highway to the city to the sea. lovely line.

yetunknown June 16 2010, 11:29:16 UTC

I thought so too! but I can't take credit for it.

When I was at the Currumbin Wildlife Sanctuary in Australia, I noticed this plaque embedded in stone right beside the parking lot. It was engraved with this quote:

TO HONOUR ME

If, when I am gone, you wish to honour me
Then plant a tree, a sight most rare
Trees planted everywhere
A highway broad from city to the sea -
Plant this tree in memory of me

John F. O'Donoghue

13/Jun/1952 - 22/Jun/2004

takkatakkatakka June 16 2010, 21:10:53 UTC

oh, that is lovely too. and in that case, i think you used the line really well!

yetunknown June 17 2010, 01:00:50 UTC

thank you! It's my first time writing anything so I'm really glad you liked it :)