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[jasperfrost]

dying to death
{ shortish }{ hard r }{ ryan/brendon }{ unbetaed }
based on the beginning of apr 03 08

Comments

[brighteratnight]

okay i'm not really a huge fan of ryan/brendon anymore e_e but i saw the cut text was from motion city and they're my favorite.

"I'm glad your feelings for me are so unconditional," Ryan says sarcastically

Heeee. Cos, I can totally see him saying this, voice barely lilting in a sarcastic tone yet still mostly monotone. It totally makes the characterization in this for me, so. *nods*

And Brendon falling asleep with his thumb in his mouth, and then Ryan waking up with uh. Something else in Brendons mouth? Meh! *flails*

I've found myself incapable of writing with capitals anymore (really the only reason this comment has them is because of this piece) so I applaude your strength. I'm well aware that come next school year my teacher's are going to tear me apart. *sigh* They just dont understand what it can add to the tone of a piece.

♥

[jasperfrost]

Hey, totally my favorite, too! LOVE THEM!

Haha! Thank you!

I know, capitals aren't nearly as interesting as lower case letters. Oh, wow. That's ironic. I just wrote this entire comment in capitals, too! :)

Thanks again!

[darksylvia]

this is so sweet :D

[jasperfrost]

Thank you!!!

[jasperfrost]

Thanks!