Labor of Love, s/u, 2/3, prompt #31

Dec 29, 2009 21:35

Pairing: Spock/Uhura
Summary: It doesn't matter if it's a lifetime or a fading memory - he will find his way back to her.
Rating: R (for language)
Author's Note: Written for Read more... )

s/u, uhura, mccoy, star trek, lol, spock, supt, black alnair, st

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recumbentgoat December 30 2009, 07:12:06 UTC
*claps hands furiously* i believe! I believe!! ohh i can't wait for part 3!

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black_alnair December 31 2009, 08:42:56 UTC
Hehe, you just have to believe...that I'm not that sadistic....well, most of the time.

PS Cutest icon ever!

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recumbentgoat December 31 2009, 15:40:16 UTC
hahah thank you!

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witblogi December 30 2009, 07:22:23 UTC
omg. OMG I'M SO EXCITED RIGHT NOW.

ffffff I love this fic so much already lol it's like you looked in my brain! Chekov and the heart lol! and the hoverbikkeeesss LOL joyride is going to joyously haunt me forever lmao and the cactus o m g the cactus. Spock would totally have a cactus one of those little round ones :3

\o/ *gleeface*

thankyoux2!

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black_alnair December 31 2009, 08:40:12 UTC
I'm so glad you are liking this! I was concerned that you wanted a lighter fic since it was the holidays after all and the tone of the prompt seemed to indicate a lighter fic but this was one of those *things* that latches on your brain stem and won't let go until you write it. Uh, sort of.

Yeah, I looked up what fics you had written and that's why I was like, dude, I need a hoverbike in this! And well, the heart thing of course came from you. Hope you will like the ending!

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That's all I get?! ;) love_in_spanish December 30 2009, 07:22:33 UTC
Oh my goodness! If my eyes weren't dry and still tingling from getting my hair mask in them while showering, they would be all wet and drippy. This is angsty to the end! Even Spock's return to consciousness is angsty. If I wasn't so happy that he regained consciousness, I'd say the ending was rather anticlimactic on the surface. You really know how to manipulate the emotions of your readers. My heart is pounding; it feels like someone has been squeezing it and squeezing it for the better part of 3 chapters and a prologue, and then abruptly let go. Whoa! Thanks for the heart-wrenching story. I really love how Bones got to know Spock through his vistors' comments. You can definitely determine a man's or woman's character through their actions. Your Spock is an awesome kinda guy that I'd love to get to know. More please...

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Re: That's all I get?! ;) black_alnair December 31 2009, 08:34:52 UTC
Yeah, it's pretty angsty... I was going back and forth about whether I wanted to even write this since it was supposed to be "holiday" fic, but the angst beast said I must write. Interesting you noted that the ending of this chapter is reather anticlimatic on the surface because...it is...but as you will soon see, it's rather the beginning of something else.

Thanks for stopping by and commenting! Ouch about the hair mask in the eye though!

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black_alnair December 31 2009, 08:18:27 UTC
I'm glad you liked the spin on it. I really wanted to show Spock's relationships with other characters besides the bridge crew.

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shighola December 30 2009, 13:54:28 UTC
I'm not happy yet, but it's a start.
*waits patiently for the rest*

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black_alnair December 31 2009, 08:13:55 UTC
Getting there...soon... :)

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