Remember, Poem II of "Three Poems for You," d/a

[black_alnair]

Pairing: Draco/Astoria
Summary: It is her voice that chases away the sound of silence, it is her voice that helps him remember.
Rating: PG
Author's Note: Poem II of the "Three Poems for You" series, sequel to He Dreams (Back).  Companion fic to Secret.
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling. No

Comments

[ryuugazaki]

Beautiful imagery ♥ Loving these shorts!

[black_alnair]

Thanks! They've been fun to write and very manageable but I would like to actually write a FULL story since there aren't any substantial D/A ones out there. Alas...

[fallenwitch]

Argh, woman! What is the temporal sequences of these shorts? Am I correct in guessing that Secret is first (and perhaps pre-war or pre-separation or pre-some loss of memory or something traumatic that may involve a number of not so good things), He Dreams is second and Remember is last?

Although this is nothing like A Common Cure, I felt a familiar headache coming on as I struggled to make sense of all the pieces of this yet to be finished story. I had to go back and do my homework by reading the companion pieces as this one made no sense at all the first time around. Then I read it again concentrating on content and a final time on structure, esp all those italicized words. And then it seemed to fall into place in the uncomfortable, uncertain way A Common Cure would fall into place - a sort of tenuous understanding of what I THINK you are trying to say but pleasantly occupied by the way you are saying it. There is sadness here and grief but there is also hope because there was such happiness at one time. And I am left

[fallenwitch]

And Astoria will save him in some way - like Ginny saved him in ACC. Perhaps she will save his sanity and his soul by this memory that beckons him back. See, just like ACC, still piecing this shit together even after I wrote the bloody review. *facepalm*

[black_alnair]

Too long. Too tired. Tomorrow.

[black_alnair]

Oh btw, I think I need a RPatt icon now. Explanation to commence on a later date.