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destinyawakened May 17 2010, 19:57:28 UTC
you now have an author tag, thanks for using the other tags as asked!

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slvrbld747 May 17 2010, 22:37:49 UTC

I enjoyed this fic, and you nailed Tony Stark, grins, not easy to do, but I wonder if Bruce confessing is really the way Batman would go? I see him as more of the leaving clues type, or leading his lover on a chase. Thanks for sharing this fic. It was lovely. -SB

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golden_elegance May 17 2010, 22:41:24 UTC
good point! ill have to write something better next time! ;) its all about improvement!
thanks for reading<3

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clair3 May 18 2010, 02:00:34 UTC
soooooooooooooooooo goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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golden_elegance May 18 2010, 02:01:43 UTC
omg yay! i'm so glad you think so! <3

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golden_elegance May 18 2010, 17:25:43 UTC
thanks for the feedback, you guys! it helps me a lot <3 now i know what to look out for next time ;) thank you for reading <3

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adelphix July 18 2012, 04:32:44 UTC
This is awesome! I love it!!! It was cute fluff, AND sexy! Very nice! I love how you incorporated a few of my favorite things in a Tony/Bruce fic. One; Tony didn't know Bruce was Batman BUT was suspicious! [; Two;The cute banter they have together! I think you wrote both characters very nicely! Tony with his sarcasm, Bruce with his serious/guilty side. But I also like how once their feeling were up in the air, you managed to turn it really sexy really fast. Even if it was already sexy the second they got into that sauna! [; But really, I love what you did! Tony wants Bruce, not sure if Bruce wants him, finds out that not only DOES Bruce want him, but also get's a little sexy time with the infamous Mr.Wayne too! ;P This story is cute, sexy fluff! :D You wrote everything to perfection, good job! And I thank you for this nice story! [:

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