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Fic: Lines in the Sand; Chapter 1

Mar 29, 2010 17:29

Title: Lines in the Sand
Author: maîtredelaville
Feedback: lemaitredelaville[at]yahoo/gmail[dot]com
Disclaimer: I own neither the Iron Man Movieverse nor the Nolanverse.
Rating: R
Summary: "You're so stuck on doin' what's good, you've forgotten about what's right." BatmanxIron Man. Mid TDK. Post IM1 ( Read more... )

author: maitredelaville, rating: r, fic

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munnin_odanin March 29 2010, 23:34:26 UTC

Oh I like the sound of this. Bruce's idiot act is perfect.

Looking forward to reading more.

maitredelaville March 30 2010, 00:42:30 UTC

Bruce's idiot act is perfect.

Oh thank God! I have never written either of these boys before and Bruce's playing dumb (as well as the little bits of his "real self" shining through) was the one I worried about the most. Tony pretty much writes himself. ^^

Thank you so much!

munnin_odanin March 30 2010, 00:49:51 UTC

No you've got it perfect.

"I'm sorry," he said. "I didn't know." I can almost hear Batman mentally pulling up the files of Tony's kidnap and subsequent escape as Bruce apologised. Spot on!

maitredelaville March 30 2010, 01:00:53 UTC

I was actually toying with the idea of Bruce being so involved in his Batman drama at the time (or still away on his seven year soul-search) that he actually didn't know what had happened to Tony. It may go either way, still. I'm not sure yet. Depends on which one is more interesting.

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ladytygereyez March 30 2010, 00:44:02 UTC

I am definitely intrigued by this. I do love snarky!Tony. That's one of his best features. *giggle*

Thanks for sharing and I can't wait for the next installment.

maitredelaville March 30 2010, 00:56:33 UTC

Thank you! It seems that my Tony's default is snark. He also doesn't. stop. talking. I was beginning to get a little worried about how long this chapter was running, especially since it was only one scene, one. XD

tallyslium March 30 2010, 01:56:36 UTC

You did a great job writing Tony's voice, right down to the snarky thoughts. I could really picture him in my mind, and that's usually difficult for me to do. Looking forward to more chapters :)

maitredelaville March 30 2010, 02:56:35 UTC

Thanks! I admit I worried more about Bruce than Tony, but I'm glad to hear that Tony's voice came through well; I had so much fun writing him.^^

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maitredelaville March 30 2010, 22:55:10 UTC

Thank you so much! I can only hope I don't disappoint.

clair3 March 30 2010, 17:52:12 UTC

aaahaahh dying to read the next part!

maitredelaville March 30 2010, 22:56:59 UTC

Then I'll have to get the next installment out snappish, shan't I? ^^ Thank you very much.