Your Aiba/Jun makes me really think that they're meant for each other like Ohmiya, and I see teeny tiny bits because it's always Ohno and Nino and this is just so painful how Jun couldn't decide, and Nino just letting him go without a word and not knowing how to talk about everything and Aiba waiting, and just, finally. I've been rooting for Nino/Jun in the first two chapters, but now I'm just confused. Your writing is just amazing, everything is really beautifully written that it just makes me hold my breath while reading. Your Angst D:
I'm all sad-face, and I can't wait for the last chapter, but I'll be waiting patiently :D
Oh. Oh wow. I just want to echo something you wrote, "Finally," Aiba says quietly, simply. I'd wait forever for you to update :]
I like the angst that you mix in, it's subtle and not glaringly obvious but it's there and the characters are hurting nonetheless. Aiba. I really really love your Aiba. (And I totally took a deep breath before typing out Aiba.) He's so understanding and just damn perceptive of Jun. That's why they'd work. Cos Jun would never ask for certain things and Aiba knows and he gives without being cocky or judgmental.
The whole Nino mess. Well it's a mess, simply put. I don't want to pick a side or a pairing even though I'm pretty sure you know which side I'm more of a fan of xDD But I love this fic and I can't wait till your next update :D
Jun is so wonderfully tormented. I just... love the hesitation within all of it. I love Aiba pushing, wanting to force Jun to acknowlege what he hasn't yet acknowleged for himself.
There's so much delicious uncertainty. What role does Ohno have in all of this? What does it mean now that Sho and Aiba know? What is Nino really thinking beneath his facade?
It takes serious talent to weave a story full of so much uncertainty and manages not to annoy or confuse the reader with all that's left unstated.
:D You've hit on the few points that are still those uncertainties that need to be addressed. I only hope I can do that well in one final part. Thank you for reading! ♥
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Your Aiba/Jun makes me really think that they're meant for each other like Ohmiya, and I see teeny tiny bits because it's always Ohno and Nino and this is just so painful how Jun couldn't decide, and Nino just letting him go without a word and not knowing how to talk about everything and Aiba waiting, and just, finally. I've been rooting for Nino/Jun in the first two chapters, but now I'm just confused. Your writing is just amazing, everything is really beautifully written that it just makes me hold my breath while reading. Your Angst D:
I'm all sad-face, and I can't wait for the last chapter, but I'll be waiting patiently :D
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I'd wait forever for you to update :]
I like the angst that you mix in, it's subtle and not glaringly obvious but it's there and the characters are hurting nonetheless. Aiba. I really really love your Aiba. (And I totally took a deep breath before typing out Aiba.) He's so understanding and just damn perceptive of Jun. That's why they'd work. Cos Jun would never ask for certain things and Aiba knows and he gives without being cocky or judgmental.
The whole Nino mess. Well it's a mess, simply put. I don't want to pick a side or a pairing even though I'm pretty sure you know which side I'm more of a fan of xDD But I love this fic and I can't wait till your next update :D
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I am absolutely not picking sides in this. Arashi/Arashi is my one true love and I couldn't possibly let this end with anyone left out.
Thank you. ♥♥♥
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Jun is so wonderfully tormented. I just... love the hesitation within all of it. I love Aiba pushing, wanting to force Jun to acknowlege what he hasn't yet acknowleged for himself.
There's so much delicious uncertainty. What role does Ohno have in all of this? What does it mean now that Sho and Aiba know? What is Nino really thinking beneath his facade?
It takes serious talent to weave a story full of so much uncertainty and manages not to annoy or confuse the reader with all that's left unstated.
Yay you!
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