Comments | waxrose: Eye of the Storm (Nobuta wo Produce)

waxrose

Eye of the Storm (Nobuta wo Produce)

Mar 30, 2007 20:36

For thawrecka, for getting this prompt out of my head and into words. Procrastination has never been so much fun!

Eye of the Storm | 686 words | PG | Shuuji to Akira to Nobuta | Nobuta wo Produce

( A little bit of wall-kissing and a lot of awkwardness )

fanfiction:misc., nobuta wo produce

Comments 38

thawrecka March 31 2007, 02:26:53 UTC

Gosh, this is so awesome. SO AWESOME ♥! Just lovely description and the characterisation is so much yes and glee!

Though: doesn't mention how Aoi, - how Aoi what? I think you missed out a word there.

waxrose March 31 2007, 02:55:49 UTC

Ah, thanks! I knew I had missed something. I double-checked to make sure I hadn't lost out to my "Kame" slips. :/

♥ ♥ ♥ *loves on you*

spurious March 31 2007, 02:28:43 UTC

Akira kissing with his eyes open is so *_* to me, for some reason. He just seems like he would.

Upside-down dance!! LOVE.

Oh, Nobuta. She really is the mature one, isn't she. I love her in this.

Also love: the description of the way Shuuji looks when he sees her smiling and confident and a;lksdjfs *_*

Loved this. ♥♥

waxrose March 31 2007, 02:54:46 UTC

God, how hard is it to write Akira. SO HARD. *___________*
I was trying to find every conceivable way of making sure that he didn't talk.

Yes, Nobuta. :))) She really sees everything.

Thank you! ♥

spurious March 31 2007, 02:56:34 UTC

AWW, POOR AKIRA. *_* lolol. He is really difficult to figure out though. BUT I LOVE HIM. And UPSIDE DOWN DANCE. al;skdj.

waxrose March 31 2007, 03:07:56 UTC

HE IS. I CAN'T SEEM TO MAKE HIM COME ACROSS AT ALL.

:D I used to do it all the time, as a little kid. Pretend to dance on the ceiling. It seems like something that Akira would do.

I'm trying to imagine the Seishun Amigo dance, upside-down.

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freakytiki March 31 2007, 03:09:14 UTC

You have truly become a Nobuta fan!
Good to see..
Love your userpics!

Are you even online?

waxrose March 31 2007, 03:13:07 UTC

It's good to know that my day's work wasn't entirely academic. :D

I shall be...in a minute. *shifty*

asinful March 31 2007, 03:31:30 UTC

Awww! This was so cute and sweet and so utterly perfect. The whole thing has such a wonderfully canon feel to it. *glee*

because Shuuji would have pushed Akira away, at least once. He wouldn't have known how to give in right away.

OMG YES! That is so Shuji! :)

This was a little slice of heaven, and I'm still sitting here smiling from ear to ear. Thank you! ♥

waxrose March 31 2007, 18:38:59 UTC

Awww, thank you. I like to think that Nobuta still knows Shuuji a little better than he knows himself.

:))))) ♥

didikoishi March 31 2007, 03:46:12 UTC

She pretends not to notice Shuuji's arm brush against Akira's whenever the opportunity arises, or how Akira watches Shuuji like he's something new and precious. She doesn't know how to tell them what she sees and she doesn't know how to tell them that it's okay.

I think these sentences summarise the perfection of this fic. I liked it very much ^^v

waxrose March 31 2007, 18:39:30 UTC

♥ :D I'm glad that you enjoyed this. OTF forever!