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[roma_ann]

A friend of mine passed on this poem of novelist-poet Laura Kasischke

Comments

[chibibluebird]

Beautiful and powerful imagery.

Only thing is, some of the line breaks are distracting and seem almost random. Try reading this out loud, and decide whether you need to move some of the line breaks to improve the rythm of the piece.

[roma_ann]

Ah, but this one, unfortunately, I did not write-- I was just passing it along.

Thanks for rdng though!