Comments | waveform_delta: Second Chance LJI, Week 2: Front Porch

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Second Chance LJI, Week 2: Front Porch

Mar 13, 2017 23:26

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i_17bingo March 14 2017, 11:29:40 UTC

I like the rhythm of the dialogue here. It's very natural, and matches up with how siblings bicker. Also, the destruction of those poor cows filled me with so much dread.

rayaso March 14 2017, 13:07:42 UTC

This was so much fun! I pity the mother. When it comes to "it could kill you" or "it'll get the job done," some people never hear the warning.

beldarzfixon March 14 2017, 19:13:43 UTC

Wouldn't want to be in his (melted) shoes =)

kehlen March 15 2017, 15:28:31 UTC

Oh, boy. Here's to hoping he does not have any heart problems after that stunt.

alycewilson March 15 2017, 22:04:09 UTC

Cute! I have the feeling these two get into this sort of trouble a lot.