Week 4:Back riding

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Rog was standing outside the rec center, sipping a can of Coke, when Biff and his friends came swaggering out like a little army squadron

Comments

[sarcasmoqueen]

Awesome - way to go, Rog!

[emo_snal]

Rog -- interesting name!

[karmasoup]

Cool story. Very realistic, too. I wish more people knew that bullies are usually just masking their own insecurities. It’s a tough lesson to learn, and this was a great way to discover it. Very well put together, this.

(*minor concrit, btw, I’m guessing you meant to say Biff knocked the soda out of his [Rog’s] hand and pointed at the spill.)

[jem0000000]

Poor dude. Go him, though!

[i_17bingo]

Oh, Biff. You are such a douche.