Fic: Circling

Sep 17, 2009 04:49

Title: Circling
Summary: The morning after a hunt, Sam and Dean nurse their wounds, watch HGTV and contemplate what’s important in life. Hurt!boys, one shot. Set sometime during season 1.
Disclaimer: For the sick pleasure of myself and others. No copyright infringement intended.

Beneath the porch light
We've all been circling
-from "Cosmia" by Joanna ( Read more... )

fic: circling, .hurt!dean, .hunting injuries, .hurt!sam, fic

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jackfan2 September 17 2009, 22:10:01 UTC
Oh.. this.. THIS was just priceless. Both boys licking their wounds; deep cuts revealing the severed lives they've never known. Knowing they still need each other no matter their dreams.

Really lovely work.

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wave_obscura September 20 2009, 22:41:11 UTC
*blush* Thank you so much :)

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wave_obscura September 20 2009, 22:42:51 UTC
.*smishes it very gently so as not to wake Dean or hurt their hurt bits*

Haha, awesome. That line gave me the same warm fuzzy feeling like reading a schmoopy h/c fic. I'm glad you liked it :D

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xwacky September 18 2009, 02:04:57 UTC
Love this!!

The house-hunting reality show on tv is a genius backdrop.

...he and Dean speed over the peak of a hill just as the sun dips low in the sky, and the clouds lounge like whip cream on the burnt and purple horizon, and the warm wind is perfect for classic rock even though it’s a song he’s heard a million, trillion times.

How picturesque! Such a stark contrast to the moldy motel room and the debilitating physical pain. Together, the beautify and ugly, the serenity and misery form a full spectrum of a life that's fully lived. Yeah, I can see why Sam says: “this is okay with me.”

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wave_obscura September 21 2009, 01:35:58 UTC
Nice... you explained what I was trying to do way better than I ever could have *writes you love letters*

Thank you so much for reading :D

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xwacky September 22 2009, 04:55:40 UTC
*Clutching the love letters snugly and blowing kisses to you*

Oh I think you handle words much more aptly than me dear. But thanks! {{twirls you}}

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serena64 September 18 2009, 10:23:45 UTC
That was fab. I loved it.

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wave_obscura September 21 2009, 01:36:19 UTC
Thank you :D

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ursalita September 18 2009, 11:42:39 UTC
I liked the idea of them watching that show and the differences between their life and whats on screen. And you didn't gloss over their life (bedbugs) but somehow its all they want. Thanks for sharing.

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wave_obscura September 21 2009, 01:39:12 UTC
Thank you for reading :)

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