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NCIS Reverse Bang Entry: The Coming Storm

May 18, 2018 17:23

Title: The Coming Storm

Author: WaterSoter

Summary: In a world where a small percentage of the population manifest special elemental powers, Tony was an outsider even among his own people. NCIS Reverse Bang. Canon AU. Gen.

Main Characters: Anthony “Tony” DiNozzo, Cassie Yates, Jethro Gibbs, Timothy “Tim” McGee, Tom Morrow, Abby Sciuto.

Genre: Action- ( Read more... )

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water_soter May 19 2018, 17:48:48 UTC

I didn't have one for this story. Truthfully it was not what I had initially wanted to write but I wanted to get something done. This story was supposed to be longer, there's two scenes between that in the last one that are supposed to help and then about five more after that last one. RL has just really gotten in my way. Death in the family, lost my job, and now I'm moving so it's been insane. Sigh.

This is a part of a much larger universe but I couldn't do a crossover since the artist had asked not to. But oh yeah, big universe this one. :D

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water_soter May 19 2018, 18:49:10 UTC

I don't have any yet but I plan to write them. This was supposed to be my intro to that world, sigh. I'll send you a message once I post any of them.

Yeah, they do. It was just so hard because of the way he died . . . Sigh.

a_boleyn May 19 2018, 20:53:39 UTC

Intriguing concept of alters, shifts and elementals. So many questions which I hope to see if future installments.

water_soter May 19 2018, 20:57:28 UTC

Thank you!! This is by no means the end. :D

riftghost May 23 2018, 03:09:15 UTC

I love the concept. Some of your word choices are not correct ( Delivery breaking government property; I think you mean deliberately)
or word endings are not right ( ...checked the reported. The reported squawked...) makes reading jarring, not smooth, as the reader needs to reread to figure out the correct word. Not sure if this is from spell check but it needs a good editor. I am intrigued, though, and will continue on.

water_soter May 23 2018, 03:38:36 UTC

Both, lol!! I rushed a lot of this so I didn't have time to give it a good view or have a beta go over it. I will be revising it and hopefully letting it make more sense. Thanks for the heads up!!

riftghost May 23 2018, 03:11:22 UTC

Hmmm, there's no more? Awkward.

water_soter May 23 2018, 15:34:08 UTC

Sorry about that. This was initially going to be a much longer story but unfortunately a family tragedy and real life got in the way.

sexycazzy June 4 2018, 10:54:19 UTC

Hi, will read this later & comment - got a wedding to go to!

It was a pleasure to make artwork for your story and I just wanted to let you know that I've made a post with both artwork - here's a link: https://sexycazzy.livejournal.com/204913.html - could you please add this to your post? Many thanks