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Part II of Protecting a Protector - Witch Tale

Aug 22, 2006 20:35

Title: Protecting a Protector

Author: Allison (

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kcarolj65 August 23 2006, 02:28:29 UTC

Ooh, chilling ending. I'd be worried about Cleo, too - that's some dark stuff she invoked there.

Pardon me for being nosy, but I think this story lends itself to first-person POV really well, rather than third-person. Just a suggestion...

aecflower August 23 2006, 03:32:54 UTC

Thank you! I wanted to have a low-key but fitting ending to the fic. Also, I don't disagree that first-person POV would work for this story, but I'm so used to writing third-person Spuffy that first-person stuff doesn't often pop up in my head LOL Well, that and the fact that I tend to write more from my viewpoint than the main character's when I write in that way, too *shrugs* Excellent point, though.

athenewolfe September 3 2006, 04:45:21 UTC

ahhhh is it bad i feel sorry for spike? I know that is wrong but i do lol

oracleholly September 6 2006, 20:45:24 UTC

Wow! Yikes for Spike. I know I should be focused on Cleo, but my Spike! *pets Spike* I do like how you 'fleshed' out a story of what happened between the scene in the park with Spike/Nikki/Robin and the subway car. Nice spell for Robin. But then again -- we know that later on - he put himself in danger. Did this spell have anything to do with how he didn't die at the end of Chosen?