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wastetheyears

The Little Sacrifices

Jan 11, 2008 22:57

Title: The Little Sacrifices
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real.
Characters/Pairings: Sam, Dean. No pairing.
Word Count: 4,048
Summary: When Sam tells Dean he would rather hang out with his friends for his sixteenth birthday than spend time with him, Dean doesn’t take it very well.

Sam’s Birthday, Seven Years Prior

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supernatural fic

Comments 7

suonguyen January 12 2008, 10:16:42 UTC

Gosh thats so sweet. I felt so bad for Dean when Sam said he didn't want to spend time with Dean and rather be with his friends. Poor Dean. But alteast things turned out in the end.

wastetheyears January 12 2008, 17:23:54 UTC

Thank you for taking the time to review; I really appreciate it. This was kind of how I pictured a teenage Sam- trying to pull away from his family but feeling bad whenever he hurt Dean in the process. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. :)

fredsmith518 January 12 2008, 10:34:31 UTC

I liked the two looks at Sam's birthday. Very good present choices.

wastetheyears January 12 2008, 17:26:24 UTC

Thanks so much for taking the time to review- I'm glad you liked this. The present was something I was unsure on, like, "What can Dean possibly give this kid that isn't completely lame?" But then I decided to make Sam sixteen and it all became pretty obvious. :)

llivla January 14 2010, 08:36:40 UTC

I want to hug this fic, hold it close, and never let go ( ... )

electricmonk333 January 17 2010, 20:58:14 UTC

Such a sweet fic.:) I like that Sam wasn't a complete ass to Dean.

gorilla_bananas January 21 2010, 02:52:09 UTC

Just like the little sacrifices he makes to get that smile on Sam’s face… in the end, it’s well worth the struggle.

That story was amazing. I got really emotionally invested at the end, and I got a little teary, and it was wonderful!