Something of Forever- Prologue

[wastetheyears]

Comments

[alienat]

Wow, that's a great start. I really love it.

There's just one thing that confuses me, who's driving the car Jensen is getting into? Sometimes you say Adam and sometimes Jake. Is that the same person?

Well, anyway I'll go now and read the other chapters. Great work.

[bt_kady]

I noticed the same thing. Great story so far, though.

[wastetheyears]

*smacks forehead* Oh wow. I don't know how I managed to do that- five times, nonetheless. Thanks so much for pointing it out- all instances are now fixed. :)

[alienat]

Don't worry. I know sometimes things like that just happen. Sometimes I read over my stories over and over and then at the tenth time or so I still find typos or continuity issues. So, I know. ;)))