OOC: concrit post

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ooc: concrit post

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anonymous July 30 2009, 08:59:09 UTC
warriorothesea July 30 2009, 09:32:13 UTC
Okay! Thanks for mentioning that. I don't think you're making Luffy too dumb at all, first of all. HE'S AWESOME, SO STFU. ♥

Anyway, in canon Usopp seems to play the tsukkomi to Luffy's boke a lot of the time, but maybe I'm overdoing it. I am deffo up for lots of retarded bffitude, though! They will obviously have to make lots of stupid plans that they think are amazing/hilarious. :Db

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anonymous August 2 2009, 18:44:44 UTC
warriorothesea August 2 2009, 22:01:56 UTC
jhfkdaf thank you! I didn't realize anyone from outside the game was watching him, but it's very flattering. I hope I don't disappoint you in the future!

I probably have been playing up the sensitivity about his nose a little too much, but it seems like for a lot of characters meeting him for the first time, it's the first thing they remark on, so he might have developed a mild complex about it. XD I think he still sees "Longnose" from his nakama as an affectionate nickname, though, most of the time. I'll keep what you said in mind!

I am a little confused about your other point, not in that I disagree with it (because I think that analysis is right on), but just in that I'm not sure how to apply it to a game like this. Since most of the interaction is journal-based, there isn't a lot of opportunity for either standing with the crew OR running away in battle situations. So if you have anything further to elaborate on this or suggestions for implementing it, I'd love to hear them. :)

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anonymous August 2 2009, 18:46:19 UTC
warriorothesea August 2 2009, 22:02:38 UTC
Thank YOU for commenting with your thoughts! I really appreciate it!

I WISH I had room for a lot more icons for him. He has so many varied expressions, haha. Though there are some I have a hard time finding icons of (particularly embarrassed, and mildly nervous; I can't seem to find either so this icon gets a lot of mileage as it's the closest I have to either), so...what I'm getting at here, is if you know of any good places to find some different expressions I seem to be lacking, I'd love links! :Db

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anonymous September 23 2009, 10:08:13 UTC
warriorothesea October 13 2009, 05:34:04 UTC
Hey! I just wanted to let you know I wasn't ignoring your comment or anything like that; my laptop was just out of commission for a while, so I couldn't log into my Usopp account for about three weeks. And now I think that it's a little late to go back and address that, since everyone's kind of moved on from that by now. Thanks for the comment, though!

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