Edward - Wave Soul

[warrenswod]

Edward studied the flame in front of him, studied the burning coal. A portable grill may not have been a standard Ordo device, but it was a controllible flame and thus good for his purposes. He breathed in deeply, throwing some incense over the fire, meditating on the dancing flame, the heat it gave off. Something about it was wrong, he could feel

Comments

[shadewritings]

Nice.

[warrenswod]

Thank you very much! I was glad to get some Coil details down. It may have been a bit cliche with the manifestation of dreams or images, but I think something becomes cliche for a reason, no? I'd love to see more of this, to be sure, and I intend to do more as he develops Coils and things.

[vampvixen13]

Very well written. Captivating!

[warrenswod]

From someone who's such a prolific poster and fine writer, that is compliment indeed!

[vampvixen13]

:D

[hawk_of_gold]

Oooh, that's cool.

[warrenswod]

Thank you! I had an idea afterwards, but I sadly cannot do it now. Perhaps another time, if I feel it's appropriate.