Fighting Fish (Kris/Tao), Part 3/?

[warmboys]

Fighting Fish (3/?)
Kris/Tao
~7700 words
NC-17
Kris is perpetually confused, and Zitao is the antidote.

For Joie, who is the biggest taoris fan I know and whom I've missed dearly ;;

Comments

[allegorein]

omg i'm so scared to read this because i don't know if it's going to be a cliffhanger or---

[allegorein]

i want to make sweet love to this whole part, but you already know that because you witnessed my embarrassing live commentary in twitter ;;;;

i just really like the whole mood you've set up for this part. it was comfortable and warm and domestic, and the moments with them in the apartment were like little gems. (especially when they were joking around followed by a scene

“It smells really,” Orfila began, sniffing around the kitchen. [...] “-Fresh,” she finished. “Did you guys clean up while I was gone?” She folded her arms and looked from Zitao to Kris. “I’m impressed.”i started laughing by the word 'smell' and continued until 'fresh'. IF ONLY SHE KNEW THE SORDID DEEDS THAT CAUSED THE CLEAN UP IN THE FIRST PLACE

[warmboys]

ILU /o\ but man i can't even read the italicized parts of your comment haha cringe galore

yes please continue to be patient!! ;;;; like i was with wishbone ;;;

[allegorein]

STOP CRINGING WOMAN. and you're not that much of a kaisoo fan anyway (i need to work on that btw) so...that cancels that out! lol

i leave you with a parting message:

screwwwwwbrrrrrrrrrrr

. o O O

[jorge_callas]

I don't have the time to read this right now--transcribing is an urgent bitch but fuck yeah

[warmboys]

omg this gif on my phone plays at 10x speed and it's mesmerizing. (please, take your time!!)

[tsubon]

Fff, replying on my phone, so excuse any autocorrect mistakes that might happen.

Omg I love everything about this part and Tao is so damn precious. And Kris, so cheesy and gooey, but like the good kind. The little details you've written give me heart twinges (even during the porn sobs). I'd quote things but this comment might get too long. OTL

Also omg ChanTao I love it (even tho Yeol is a jerk here lol).

Thanks for this, I have been missing Taoris so mu h and this hits the spot. <3

[warmboys]

i totally understand! trying to comment via your phone is the worst so a big thank you for suffering through that haha :D and gah i'm terribly glad you liked this ;; sob kris really is the greasiest, isn't he T_T i facepalmed a lot while writing some of his lines lolol

<333 thanks so much for reading, and yay for temporarily satisfying your taoris itch!!

[colorfunk]

ok real talk now i still haven't figured out how to discuss how in love i am with this fic and i didn't even try for the first two parts but i will try a little bit now???

i guess my favorite thing is how you build up each of your characters with so much care, everyone has a story, everyone has so much heart (GOD YOUR KRIS), the characters that i don't know anything about irl (orfilia~) are woven in so comfortably and the characters that don't even actually show up like amber (clawing at my face at the henber "sexuality crisis") and chanyeol (fff that sad destructive teenage cruelty) and jessica in the previous parts are still fully formed with their own lives and personalities and ~issues (ps. the henry love guru part is my ACTUAL favorite, the JT psa ref made me lose my shit but then Gotta be someone my family can depend on. You know? right after made me want to cry augh fuck somehow that really got to me?) SO YEAH it's something i really really admire, plus the way you incorporate backstory without it ever feeling shoehorned in,

[warmboys]

it's funny you mentioned clawing at your face because that's how i feel right now reading this comment...>_<;;; in no way do you sound pretentious omg <3 um er ok it's honestly such a gigantic relief that you found this readable despite the huge cast of extraneous characters, i was really nervous about writing what would seem like OCs to most >_< sob i've watched the jt psa a few too many times but to think he'd come back with a lukewarm single like suit&tie T_T jt-sama douuushite T_T

i screamed a little at your ps fdajlk confession: they have their own sidestory 8333

blah i'm one of the least coherent/eloquent people ever so just a huge thank you for your ridic sweet comment ♥ now i want to cry ;;;; lmao

[colorfunk]

i fucking know right jt ur tearing up my heart ;;; i do like mirrors a lot though so fingers crossed that we didn't spend 7 yrs of our lives waiting for a bad album? jt we're rooting for you, we're all rooting for you

[warmboys]

...s-seven years omg say it ain't so, it can't have been that long fml. also were you team nsync...

dude i just realized this song is still playing

[herocountry]

FUCK I HATE YOU

it's 5:30 am and I just read this on my phone bc I couldn't sleep and I hate you I'll be back

[warmboys]

BUT I WUBS YOU BOO