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warmboys

Alternative (QMi)

Oct 27, 2011 18:10

Alternative
Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
~4900 words
R/NC-17

I talk to Cecilia too much. It manifests in ambitious desires that never quite flower into fullfledged stories. 10:14pm edit: wow what was I on. I meant "bad things."

( Zhou Mi waits a year and a half before saying anything. )

sj: c: zhou mi, f(x): c: victoria, sj: p: kyuhyun/zhou mi, fandom: super junior, sj: c: kyuhyun

Comments 42

sansmerci October 28 2011, 02:12:27 UTC

oh man. you know how i feel about this already because like, msn, but still. oh man the ending, my mouth is like mostly open

basically i love how loaded this is. tension that is palpable and delicious

heh heh heh

sansmerci October 28 2011, 04:56:53 UTC

also lol your edit

warmboys October 29 2011, 03:17:54 UTC

I was so nervous while you were reading. REALLY NERVOUS.

black_silver October 28 2011, 05:37:02 UTC

i actually gasped as i was scrolling down my flist, and then i put my bookmark in my book

Come home with me, David said quietly, touching Zhou Mi’s hand.
i knew i would regret reading past this little bit, i should've prolonged the moment

;~;

not done, but leaving this comment anyway

warmboys October 29 2011, 03:18:43 UTC

I love the way you describe your reactions kjflaj also cannot forget that one time you described something as a meat hook tearing through innards (it was related to hanchul) ♥

catherine_leite October 28 2011, 05:44:58 UTC

*sobs* this is toooo good!!!

ah... qmi.. I can't decide how i actually feel about kyu..... does he like zhoumi or what?

the ending was kinda.... unfinished.
hope you will do something to this. it's to be continued right?

warmboys October 29 2011, 03:19:57 UTC

Aha, open ending :DDD or... copout. :DD;;

I don't think I can continue this ><; but I'm sure someone else will pick up the slack!

Thanks a lot for reading!

black_silver October 28 2011, 05:55:36 UTC

“Ask why he didn’t send you an epistle,” Kyuhyun says, reading over his shoulder and dripping toothpaste over the couch.
or a MISSIVE! XD

um but hey otherwise this killed me thanks i hadn't died yet this week

warmboys October 29 2011, 03:20:24 UTC

OH GOD I totally forgot about that. WAE YOU REMIND ME

black_silver October 29 2011, 04:37:50 UTC

HAHAHA HOW COULD YOU FORGET, THAT SHIT WAS EPIC!

g_odalisque13 October 28 2011, 07:23:08 UTC

this was so wonderful!
i read it to cheer myself up b/c i had a shitty day and it worked! haha.
it's been too long since i've read a good qmi fic :)

warmboys October 29 2011, 03:21:08 UTC

So glad to be of service! Hope the cheer has lasted into today as well. Thanks a lot for reading!