spit or (hyukjae/heechul)

Dec 25, 2010 01:20

spit or
Hyukjae/Heechul
1070 words
for catskilt who was craving hyukchul

merry christmas hyung )

sj: c: heechul, sj: c: eunhyuk, fandom: super junior, sj: p: eunhyuk/heechul

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ky_rin December 26 2010, 05:15:50 UTC
akjsdlakjshd god so awkwardly cute ;__; why are you like this, hyukchul?

eunhyuk's thought processes about looming and swallowing :DDDDDDDDDD

heechul blushing at the end totally got me ♥

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warmboys December 26 2010, 16:58:40 UTC
all this talk of hyukchul here and on twitter is making me miss them. I think I will go click on all those links people have been tweeting :D

oddly if there's anyone to make Heechul blush, I'd want it to be Hyuk :3

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thundersquall December 26 2010, 07:52:55 UTC
OH MY GOD HYUKCHUL AND HEECHUL BEING A COMPLETE AND UTTER TEASE AND HYUKJAE'S ODDLY CLICHED AND YET MADLY CREATIVE IDEA FOR A CHRISTMAS PRESENT ALSDKJHFSAKDA

"We have the rest of the month," Heechul said quietly, "to do all that and more."

And then he turned so red that Hyukjae realized that all this time he wasn't the only nervous one.

O - OMG DIANA YOU MAKE ME LOVE THEM SO MUCH ♥

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warmboys December 26 2010, 17:00:00 UTC
this entire story is a ball of cliche and CHEESE /)___(\ I felt as embarrassed as Hyuk writing it /)____(\

IF YOU LOVED THEM MORE YOU WOULD WRITE porn FOR THEM

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starlitbright December 28 2010, 08:59:45 UTC
THAT MADE ME HOLD MY BREATH I REALISED I WASN'T BREATHING UNTIL HALFWAY THROUGH

His smirk was growing as rapidly as a population of microorganisms in a heated petri dish.

you have a way with descriptions, really. it's perfect, but who would've thought of it?

And then he turned so red that Hyukjae realized that all this time he wasn't the only nervous one.

SO CUTE INSECURE!HEECHUL.

have nothing more to say that i haven't already said except i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove your writing and never won't. awesome for an hour, ok :(

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warmboys December 28 2010, 09:04:47 UTC
LOL DID YOU KNOW I ACTUALLY WANTED TO LAUGH THE WHOLE TEN SECONDS I SPENT WRITING THAT LINE. like "omg wtf is this /heechul!snort"

aw you!!!!! ♥

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starlitbright December 28 2010, 09:13:04 UTC
HAHAH THIS REMINDS ME OF WHEN I WROTE "city burped underfoot" in a totally serious scene AND YOU JUST LAUGHED AT IT LIKE HTE CRUEL GIRL YOU ARE.

i know, i love me too ♥ :)

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g_odalisque13 December 29 2010, 06:45:24 UTC
so hilarious. and endearing. i loved this sfm.

He should've applied baby powder as Ryeowook suggested, but he didn't want to smell like babies in Heechul's room. He didn't ever want to smell like babies, actually, but he definitely didn't want Heechul to smell babies on him. Babies were not supposed to be turnons. But then again, Heechul did have an affinity for the young and vulnerable--no, Hyukjae wasn't going to think about Sulli right now.
and this just killed me.

i think there should be more heechul/eunhyuk fics. /nods

it's late. i'm sorry this comment makes no sense whatsoever, but basically i'm saying that i thoroughly enjoyed this. OTL haha

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warmboys December 29 2010, 07:02:27 UTC
there really should be more hyukchul! I was hoping someone would make a pimp post for them ;_; I would, but there's too much history there and I'm not good with graphics and ... being comprehensive XD;; I'm really glad you liked the story though! not late at all :) thanks a lot for reading ♥

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