Windowpane Girl (CL/GD/Yanggaeng)

[warmboys]

Fandom: YG
Pairing: CL/GD/Yanggaeng
Word Count: ~1500
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The move from Baltimore’s a long one. AU.
A/N: Somewhat out of order and entirely whimsical orz

Comments

[lovelyable]

wow, diana.

so many things in this appealed to me - jiyong playing fanboy to seungho, chaerin having the sweet country (baltimore, whatever) feel even though there is clearly an edge to her that belongs in this city with them, ONEW (wtf i clearly didnt get that until i read the tags), the scene in the water with jiyong and seungho and how absolutely haunting it was, the drugs (!!!) and how i didn't even clearly sense the addiction until the last scene but then when i went back and read it it made so much sense.

i also really love that i can go back and read your fics and always find something new to appreciate, and that most of the time they don't really hit me until later.

i love your seungho most of all: how you wrote him not totally apathetic but still blase, how he cares enough to regret but doesn't say it aloud. algkalsjg. ♥

[pregnantcigar]

thank you so much for this, summer! i think i have a tendency to write too vaguely because everything's clear in my head and i assume everyone else can see what i see, but that's obviously not the case. i'm grateful that you would give it a second read. most people would just get frustrated and hit the back button XD;

and so, so happy you liked him! and relieved :)

thanks a lot ♥

[mawaru_berry]

(let's pretend I didn't forget to log out of my other account)

lol I was about to comment saying 'WHERE'S ONEW?' but then I figured it out on my own XD

But that's beside the point: I love this. I probably say that almost every time you write something, but I do mean it. Plus it's not often that I read YG fic, and this was really good. I love what you did with the images, your wording, the characters, and the dialogue. Great job ♥

[pregnantcigar]

haha i didn't want to make a big deal of it but i need all the cl/onew practice i can get before continuing 3bb :D

aw, thanks for reading despite not being in yg fandom! :)

[mawaru_berry]

Cool beans, I am not opposed to the interesting coolness that is CL/Onew, haha.

I think it's safe to say that I'll read almost anything you write, lol. I'm baaaaaarely in YG fandom, I've read some G-Ri and CL/GD before, but that's been it XD

[browna45]

wayyyy late comment (i loved this story a long time ago)
but just came back to re-read. still love it. ^^

[warmboys]

Thanks for reading <3!