This is just... wut. I love how she repeats the same sentences at the ends of different paragraphs. Like her ears are REALLY SORT OF elven... SO SORT OF ELVEN that she had to say it twice.
I hope whoever this is is young. I wouldn't take such illiteracy from anyone my age. D:
For some reason, this draenei's name reminds me of one Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way. That association makes it rather hard for me to think of this as someone's serious attempt at a character. And upon reading through it, that bond only becomes stronger.
Yes, your character appears to be attractive, deadly and muscular. Wait what? You said this like three times... Also my favorite character doesn't find... this... attractive, he prefers the company of a woman who isn't a fucking demon! Also it's a big plus if she doesn't beat him with a board. Or magically control him! That's important, just not as important as not beating him.
Her mouth looks soft and comfortable. Is it a snuggie or something?
I get the feeling that the person behind this character is young, with the bizarre writing style and frantic insistence of attractiveness. Considering that the character's whole spiel is seducing, then murdering people...uh.
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I hope whoever this is is young. I wouldn't take such illiteracy from anyone my age. D:
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Wait what?
You said this like three times...
Also my favorite character doesn't find... this... attractive, he prefers the company of a woman who isn't a fucking demon! Also it's a big plus if she doesn't beat him with a board. Or magically control him! That's important, just not as important as not beating him.
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I get the feeling that the person behind this character is young, with the bizarre writing style and frantic insistence of attractiveness. Considering that the character's whole spiel is seducing, then murdering people...uh.
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