I feel like this came out very ~DRAMATIC~, but I started it and then I had to finish it, so I suppose it might as well go here. /o\ Hope you don't mind a double fill!
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One minute: you're crouching in the mud in a ditch and your fingers are against the ground, your legs tensed, your heart beating steady, your whole body ready to run if you need to. The next: your mouth is open and you're lying down and you feel like you've been shot. You must have been shot. Your whole chest is aching, and your breath won't come right, and your heartbeat is drilling so fast through the frame of your bones. Too fast. Adrenaline. Body rising to fight the intrusion of the bullet. There must be a bullet. You drag a hand up to feel at your chest, but you can't find the wound. Dean is going to be mad, you are thinking, blankly--your hand patting your wet t-shirt, your breath huffing out in weird pants
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pound your fist into his ribs until his bones crack and break and he gets it - I loved this. <3
You want to shove yourself into him further, get your skin right up next to his so you can feel his pulse, - *loves*
You make a noise, right from your crunched-up and messy heart - This imagery is so beautiful, i love the words you used. This was perfectly intense and it only makes me mad becuz the writers are gonna do a horrible job with the Sam getting his soul back scene. i hope they read this thread and take some ideas.
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One minute: you're crouching in the mud in a ditch and your fingers are against the ground, your legs tensed, your heart beating steady, your whole body ready to run if you need to. The next: your mouth is open and you're lying down and you feel like you've been shot. You must have been shot. Your whole chest is aching, and your breath won't come right, and your heartbeat is drilling so fast through the frame of your bones. Too fast. Adrenaline. Body rising to fight the intrusion of the bullet. There must be a bullet. You drag a hand up to feel at your chest, but you can't find the wound. Dean is going to be mad, you are thinking, blankly--your hand patting your wet t-shirt, your breath huffing out in weird pants ( ... )
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You want to shove yourself into him further, get your skin right up next to his so you can feel his pulse, - *loves*
You make a noise, right from your crunched-up and messy heart - This imagery is so beautiful, i love the words you used. This was perfectly intense and it only makes me mad becuz the writers are gonna do a horrible job with the Sam getting his soul back scene. i hope they read this thread and take some ideas.
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