fic: A Person as a Boat

May 25, 2010 00:08

ADJGSKFHDAS I HATE THIS THING SO MUCH BUT GODAMMIT I WROTE.

A Person as a Boat
PG, second-person future tense, 1900 words approx.
5x22 coda

You will come back. This is a given. You will not crawl out of a shallow grave out of the ground, working your splinters into your fingers and working your nails out of them, and you will not sing Led Read more... )

fic: spn, fic

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elizardbits May 24 2010, 23:14:15 UTC
OMG

QUIT YO JIBBA JABBA FOOL

THIS IS AWESOME

imma read it again.

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wanttobeatree May 24 2010, 23:15:49 UTC
I HADN'T WRITTEN FIC IN ALMOST SIX MONTHS UNTIL THIS, I AM ALLOWED TO HAVE JIBBA JABBA.

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elizardbits May 24 2010, 23:24:36 UTC
DON'T GIMMIE NO BACKTALK SUCKA

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lila_roxo May 25 2010, 05:37:04 UTC
Hmm, interesting. I'm not quite sure about the second person but that just might be a personal preference. What I did love about this fic (so so much) is just how painfully confused and human Sam comes back, whether or not he has the nifty nifty powers Kripke has been teasing us with.

And this. One day you will go to a bar and you will tell a woman to look at you and you will strike up a friendly conversation but you will see all the tiny little muscles in her jaw tensing in ways she won’t even be aware of. You will excuse yourself and walk out of the bar and throw up in the parking lot. Oh, Sammy. Of course this would be a private hell for him, of course.

Also, Cas! Hah, it seems your deep hatred (puzzlement?) of him has been tempered! By his bewildered gaze, perhaps?

PS. Since you seem to be writing again, how about a Bear Gryls/SPN crossover? YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO.

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