fic: they're dead, they're all messed up

Jun 13, 2008 18:44

JARED AND JENSEN: BATTLING THE UNDEAD SO I DON'T HAVE TO?

they're dead, they're all messed up
J2, PG-13, 730~ words

(imdb tells me the title is from Night of the Living Dead, but I've never actually seen it, so who knows.)

Nobody expects the Spanish inquisition! )

fic: cwrps, together they fight crime, zombies, you know it would be hot, fic

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bubl June 13 2008, 18:02:51 UTC
Okay wait wait WAIT-

You haven't SEEN Night of the Living Dead?

Seriously?

For shame.

I have to go catch a bus, but I will read your story SOON.

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wanttobeatree June 13 2008, 18:04:37 UTC
I TRIED TO ONCE. I really did. But I just couldn't take it seriously, the effects were so awful.

Today I discovered it's on youtube, though, so one day!

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bubl June 13 2008, 19:56:55 UTC
I understand. You've just got to remember to laugh lots and lots.

That's crazy! I thought there was some sort of time limit.

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bubl June 13 2008, 20:03:12 UTC
Okay, first:
“Do you ever think about how maybe everything we ever filmed is real too, all the ghost and vampires and werewolves and shit
Ghost should be ghosts, yes?

♥♥♥♥
I love how it's choppy and real.

I <3 the "z-words". V. true to the denial in movies.

I really like this paragraph:
Jared can’t remember how to move until Jensen is grabbing him by the shirt, by the shoulders and the arms, shouting into his face “Come on, man, come on-- Jay, dude, we gotta go, we gotta-- fucking run.”

And also this one:
Jensen’s looking out the window, baseball bat wedged between his knees and the rifle spread across his lap. He’s a fucking excellent shot, these days. “Nah, man,” he says. “It’s never crossed my mind.”

You rock.

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montisello June 13 2008, 23:02:11 UTC
Oh, what a piece of lovely ZED-word goodness. The choppiness of it lends to the horror, even though you never got bloody about things. Er, too much bloody, I mean.

Are you gonna expand on this much? J2 goodness fighting Zeds. Lots of potential there!

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leviticus_lied June 14 2008, 07:29:13 UTC
Hey.

Hey, Susan.

First off, J2 zombie angst sniper!badass!Jensen stillfunnyandsweet!Jared F-T-everloving-W.

Second, I'd really love it if you could read the most recent entry in my journal and told me what you think, since you in a way inspired it. Well, you and Chaucer. Well. It was a collaborative effort in the inspiration.

http://leviticus-lied.livejournal.com/12148.html?mode=reply

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