A gift for Mermaidinblack...

[wantingsunrise]

This is a gift for Mermaidinblack for her birthday. I started on it yesterday... this is just a rough draft of probably the first chapter, and I have a few ideas where I'm going with it. I hope she enjoys!

Title: Cold
Author: Wantingsunrise
Rating:PG
Chapter Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Disclaimer: Indeed.
Summary: Why can't he just let himself

Comments

[spitfiresparrow]

Wow, that was wonderful...wow...that's all I can say.

I loved the way you kept them both so in character. The way Jack always avoids telling the truth, how he acts as if he doesn't care when really he does.

I really hope you post the next part soon :D It was great

x x x

[wantingsunrise]

Thank you so much! That's always my biggest fear - that I wont be able to keep them in character. They're both pretty hard to grasp, I think. I appreciate so much that you took the time to let me know that you think I'm doing a good job!

[spitfiresparrow]

You are very welcome! I really can't wait for the next bit, there is a next bit right? Hope it isn't too long.

You kept them beautifully in character :D

I really loved that last line...if I haven't already mentioned it.

xx

[heartjd]

angst! angst! angst! *snoopy dances*
Definitely looking forward the next chapter.

[wantingsunrise]

I shall join in this snoopy dance with you! Thank you very much for allowing me that special moment... haha. Thanks for your review!

[hmk88]

Awww!!! That was so so sad! But sooo good! =) Cant wait for more!!

[wantingsunrise]

I was very excited to see that something inspired you to add two extra o's to the word "so" :-)... Thank you for taking the time to read the story!

[wantingsunrise]

I heart you!

[wantingsunrise]

Yay! Characterisation!! Now, if only I could really get in to Jack and Elizabeth's heads and know what they're *really* like!