and you want her, and she wants you

[wanderlustlover]

The end of my second trip weekend of the four is cemented in poetry, napping and doing a Burt's Bees Coconut Creme/Aloe socks foot spa evening. Very quiet, and a little listless. I've been so very go for hours (days) that it seems odd to be sitting still

Comments

[sardonicynic]

Intense, visceral emotion, whether internal or external, from your characters, and descriptions so lush, they play behind my eyelids when I blink.

[wanderlustlover]

This touched my heart, so much.

[ceitfianna]

Lyrical where every word matters and going deep within the characters.

[themidnightson]

Thank you. *hugs*

[dynastessa]

Matters that go beyond the surface of a character.

You seem to draw right down into the very heart of the characters you write.

On a more appearance-y level, I also look for use of space and sentence fragments, both which work quite poetically well for you when you write.

[wanderlustlover]

I like this. This meme has made me think quite a bit.

[wanderlustlover]

I may have gotten all thick-throat-ed at this. There are a small handful of people who've watched me play her for years, which I could easily kind of blow off as a me-love blending in it it. Or me having played her so long with them, they're used to it.

But this, and her, being so new, made me a little bit of a blubbery mess when I was relaying this comment to someone. And squeaking with some pride and amazement. I'm glad it's going so well with only two eps so far, again. *hugs*