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Aug 02, 2006 22:35

http://community.livejournal.com/creativewriter/601769.html

a frankly hilarious critique of the previous poem ad my response.

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archane August 5 2006, 20:35:16 UTC
Read the poem. Liked the poem. Haven't gotten a more coherent response out, yet. Work sucks.

However, point:
You went for the line-by-line. That made me smile. And giggle a little. :) In my head, I heard things like "On the cracks about my age: group....: :)

Yes. I'm a dork. I am in fact a very tired dork. But you love me anyway. :-p

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