Yayz for an update! This one's a bit dark, but does cover some practicalities of the FF7 world, as well as the schism between city and country in reguards to death in mideval/industrial scocieties
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I don't care if it doesn't do anything for the plot, it was really needed to show us who zack is and what he's doing before he gets dragged into said plot.
The action scene was awesome, and the sneakily killing his superior *snort* officer before he gets everyone killed tells us a LOT about who Zack is. Plus you have a tendency to tell the reader what happened later or have people thinking about the important things, so it's great to have a scene where it's shown through actively doing things. Also the scene where he has to mercy-kill his uncle was great. T^T *woobieface* And the two city boys/country boys lines before and after the scene worked nicely
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*blushes madly at the praise* I'm glad you enjoyed this one!
You do have a point about my writing tendencies, I need to work on balancing those. *glares at plot bunnies* No I am not rewriting the last one!.
And I do agree with your assessment of Zack. What many tend to forget is that Sephiroth was the best SOLDIER, meaning he would have been given the most dangerous missions, thus he couldn't afford to have anyone with him that couldn't keep up, and Zack not only could, but did. And with style.
P.S. sorry for the late reply, it's been a hecktic week and I've only now gotten to my email.
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I don't care if it doesn't do anything for the plot, it was really needed to show us who zack is and what he's doing before he gets dragged into said plot.
The action scene was awesome, and the sneakily killing his superior *snort* officer before he gets everyone killed tells us a LOT about who Zack is. Plus you have a tendency to tell the reader what happened later or have people thinking about the important things, so it's great to have a scene where it's shown through actively doing things. Also the scene where he has to mercy-kill his uncle was great. T^T *woobieface* And the two city boys/country boys lines before and after the scene worked nicely ( ... )
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You do have a point about my writing tendencies, I need to work on balancing those. *glares at plot bunnies* No I am not rewriting the last one!.
And I do agree with your assessment of Zack. What many tend to forget is that Sephiroth was the best SOLDIER, meaning he would have been given the most dangerous missions, thus he couldn't afford to have anyone with him that couldn't keep up, and Zack not only could, but did. And with style.
P.S. sorry for the late reply, it's been a hecktic week and I've only now gotten to my email.
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