Wutaiverse! and Life in Apartmentville!

[wanderingscroll]

So, second update of Wutaiverse, so far sticking to my resolution to get this finished. I've got the outlines up till part 5 of this chapter finished, just need to rough draft and finish draft them. Don't worry, this chapter is much longer that 5 parts

Comments

[askerian]

man, i need to go and read back, i forgot what started the hissyfits between cloud's and aeris's moms.

I like how they plan on using their barbarian-ness for their own gain. XD also Yuffie! yuffie being sneaky and ditching her ninjas! Yay.

They could see the person- no girl
=> you need a comma there after no, otherwise it's like saying the person is not a girl.

the classis Wutaian
=> classic?

[wanderingscroll]

The thing between Ifalna and Meryl is the simple fact that it's because of Meryl's work that Hojo was able to get his hands on Ifalna in the first place. She basicly holds Meryl responsible for everything that she and Aeris have gone through with Hojo.

She does not however, place any of the blame on Cloud, as he is a child and in her mind not responsible for his mother's actions.

And yes, in a country like Wutai, where you'll never be able to join them, beat them by using the very thing that makes you different!

And thanks for the pointers!