Title: Extra Few Feet
Author: Emilie
Pairing: EW. And DM, sorta.
Rating: PG. So PG it kinda hurts.
Summary: “I’d rather listen to Coltrane than go through all that shit again.”
Disclaimer: Don’t know ‘em, don’t own ‘em. Don’t sue. I’ve got nothing but student loans, and if you want those I’ll give them willingly. No need to bring in lawyers or
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DUDE! I get to see you in like, 11 days!!!
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poinent, sad, sad....
this was so well constructed, I forgot I was reading fan fiction. You know how some people have that distinct kind of "fanfiction" feel about their stories? This didn't. It was so beautifully put together. I loved it.
Very moving. Before I decide whether one is required (or not), may I ask, have you planned for or written a second part?
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and without the first one, I'd say don't write a part two. But because there is the first one, I'm going to demand it! (hehe)
this definitely needs another chapter. These two combined were absolutely excellent, but I do need more.
Again, as a stand alone, this works by itself, but with the first one there, it is somehow incomplete, and needs the third part.
thank you for these two AMAZING pieces of writing I enjoyed them thoroughly.
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But, I'm curious as to what your mind automatically thought when you realized there needed to be a third installment...if you don't mind sharing.
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im such a mixture of emotions thats all i think i can say :)
it was beautiful and sad and a very good story line. how dom left and came back but lij didnt want him back, very origional!
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well written and painful
reminded me of my own past too *shudders*
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So, thank you :-D
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