[lj idol] week twenty five | "the only thing I'll ever ask of you..."

[waltzmatildah]

[the isolated mind: a myth]

*He turns twenty in three hours and seventeen minutes

Comments

[theun4givables]

The poetic feel of this just gives it that much more umph, and I enjoyed it. :)

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you! I definitely love me some poetry in my prose, so it's awesome to know I've achieved that here.

Thank you again :)

[n3m3sis43]

This was really atmospheric and well-done.

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you!!

[halfshellvenus]

They dance without touching, separated only by the stars. They are liquid and pulse-beats and an absence of thinking
I love the language in your works, and this was typical of the reason why. It's a gorgeous, poetic passage, and yet it's also entirely clear what the meaning behind the abstraction is.

I'm guessing this was for Intersubjectivity? You didn't list the prompt, but the title implies that.

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you for the wonderful comment :) And yes, intersubjectivity. I did make it clear in my entry comment at Gary's post, but I figured the title, as you mentioned, made it clear enough outside of there :)

[crisp_sobriety]

This writing is lovely. You really achieved that prose-poetry effect.

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you so much :)

[karmasoup]

Very erotic... a mental orgasm for the senses. I've actually had moments like, this, once, in a long ago past from another life long since forgotten. Until you brought it all rushing back.

[waltzmatildah]

Ooh, a mental orgasm. I LIKE IT :)

I am so pleased this reasonated with you... It did with me, too ;)