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waltzmatildah

[chicago fire + grey's anatomy + orphan black] comment fics | "Nobody said it was easy..."

May 26, 2013 13:27

These three fics were written for stainofmylove's comment ficathon thing [I'm pretty sure that's the Official Title!]. My thread is right here if anyone else is interested in leaving me prompts.

Title | A Place Where Words Are Spoken
Fandom | Chicago Fire
Characters | Andy + Matt + Kelly
Word Count | 350
Rating | PG
Summary | Pre-series. Set in the immediate ( Read more... )

character: cf: matt, character: cf: kelly, television: orphan black, lisal825: deserves a tag, television: chicago fire, character: ob: sarah, character: cf: andrew, character: ga: alex, character: ga: izzie, fic: prompt me, character: ob: paul, television: grey's anatomy

Comments 12

drzlilsuga May 26 2013, 04:42:18 UTC

THINGS THAT ARE NOT OKAY (and I mean that in the best way possible)

1. Paul doesn't want to let go of her hand
2. He holds onto her wrist cause he needs to be touching her
3. Sarah is now different because of her ~love~ for him
4. YOU WRITING SARAH/PAUL FIC THAT HURTS MY HEART

waltzmatildah May 27 2013, 02:42:53 UTC

I'm so glad the Sarah/Paul fic seems to have worked for people because I was SO UNSURE OF IT when I posted!! New fandoms/characters are always the scariest!!

THANK YOU!!!

citron_presse May 26 2013, 22:48:17 UTC

1. Andy knows it’s Matt claiming the backseat for himself in this mess; leaving him in charge of whatever happens next. / Not for the first time. / Probably not for the last.

Ooh, ouch!!! Also, very deft piece of writing!

It seems odd to say this about a character who had about five seconds of banter and then got burned to a crisp, but you've expanded Andy here in a way that seems entirely in-character. I would love to read something else from his POV from you, both as an lens for Kelly (and Matt), and just for the intrinsic pleasure of how you've drawn him here.

Also, this is perfect!

2. Alex is so very Alex, like stripped down (no, not that way!) and defined. Also, if anything would make me ship Alex/Izzie (which, actually, I did for a little while once) it would be this. Awesome.

3. I have no idea what you're writing about, but we both know that has not always been an impediment!! Beautiful, atmospheric writing.

You rock, ma'am!

waltzmatildah May 27 2013, 02:46:58 UTC

but you've expanded Andy here in a way that seems entirely in-character. You know what? It actually doesn't seem odd to me (even though it totally should, you're completely right!!), because I have this super CLEAR picture of Andy in my head that I often forget we only got that initial five seconds of him on our screens! It's so weird.

It's kinda like the situation I have with Amber Karev. I have her mapped out COMPLETELY in my head. Her personality, the way she speaks, the way she dresses, her hopes, dreams, insecurities. If (when??! PLEASE!) she eventually appears on GA, it's going to be so weird for me!!

(Sometimes head canons are the worst! Though, mostly, they're the best!).

ANYWAY...!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Also, YOU REALLY NEED TO WATCH ORPHAN BLACK!

catteo May 27 2013, 00:51:48 UTC

UM SO IT APPEARS THAT PEOPLE HOLDING HANDS IS A THING NOW?! I really enjoyed the CF one. This is why I am not really up for watching it any more I don't think. There was so much wasted potential with this show - SQUANDERED OPPORTUNITIES ALL THE WAY. But I really enjoyed your little glimpse. And it's so Kelly to go missing and require best friends to go on the hunt for you.

Alex/Izzie. Well yes. That basically says it all.

SARAH AND PAUL NEED TO NEVER STOP HOLDING HANDS EVER. I MISSED THEM THIS WEEK. NEEDS MOAR SEXYTEIMS. I love the fact that Paul basically can't quite work out how to let go of Sarah. I am so fascinated by the way that he starts out not loving Beth and somewhere he falls for Sarah and he can't quite work out why. And then BOOM! Clones. Last episode next week. TEARS OF BLOOD.

waltzmatildah May 27 2013, 02:53:45 UTC

I THINK PEOPLE HOLDING HANDS IS ALMOST (though, LBR, not quite) LIKE PEOPLE SHOWERING FULLY CLOTHED TOGETHER ( ... )

drzlilsuga May 27 2013, 03:39:56 UTC

Also, the notion that Paul was 'employed' to monitor Beth and she... killed herself. Not only that, she killed herself and he didn't even notice (initially). That HAS to screw with your head (I FEEL MORE FIC COMING ON! NGL!!).

Butting in to say HOLY SHITAKE MUSHROOMS.

Sigh, I love when shows/characters suck me in with only a handful of episodes.

waltzmatildah May 28 2013, 09:24:28 UTC

HOLY SHITAKE MUSHROOMS!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST!!! AAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

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waltzmatildah May 28 2013, 09:23:40 UTC

I WILL NEVER BE OVER THEM, TBQH.

NEVERRRRRRR.

Thank you ♥

mammothluv May 28 2013, 14:59:49 UTC

That Izzie/Alex fic is perfection. Every time I read your fic it's like I fall in love with them all over again and, this time, especially with Alex because of the amazing insight into who he is and what Izzie does to/for him straight from the first moment they meet.

waltzmatildah May 30 2013, 03:23:42 UTC

Thank you!!!

what Izzie does to/for him straight from the first moment they meet. This is probably more of my own head-canon but NO ONE WILL CONVINCE ME OTHERWISE that this didn't happen! Haha!

My bbs. My forever bbs.

If I was told today that I had to pick two characters from all of everything I've ever watched/read and I could only ever fic them in the future, well, NO PRIZES FOR GUESSING WHO THEY'D BE though Meredith would totally show up at random all the time! Even if I did have to change her name and pretend she ~wasn't Meredith!.

I have a 1000 scenarios for these two in my head.

Thank you so much for reading! ♥