Title: Don’t Lie Shaking In The Early Morning Frost (2/2)
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Alex/Addison/Meredith
Word Count: 2300 (5200 total)
Rating: R (TRIGGER WARNING: brief but graphic mention of past miscarriage)
♥: for
flipflop_divaSummary: A smutty, angsty post season 6 AU. Ask them later, how it happened, and Meredith will give you some
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you.
I know that I promised a more coherent review. and I know cat noises just don't cut it like they used to. but damn.
damn
this.
I love how much you can accomplish with what? one line of dialogue?
how much inner turmoil and thoughts and ideas and crescendos can be presented without uttering a single sound.
and alex. aleeeex. my bb. you've helped fix him; not completly, no he'll never be like that. too many shards from his mirror have shattered completly to dust on the floor for that to ever happen, but you've placed the most important pieces back on the old frame; like breathing. and trust. and guitar playing.
and can we just say boom goes the ovaries when I think about Alex Karev holding a baby and playing guitar.
because boom.
more coherent this time, I hope.
and as always.
meow.
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Thank you HEAPS for this most coherent comment!! (though, don't get me wrong, cat noises are also always appreciated!).
you've placed the most important pieces back on the old frame; like breathing. and trust. and guitar playing THIS! This is exactly what I was wanting to do. Not put him back together completely, because you're right, that would never work or be believable. But give him some semblance of a life (and a self) that he could be happy with (as unconventional as it may be!).
THANK YOUUUUUUU! xx
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I don't even know where to start with how many bits were the best bits because they all were. I LOVED the whole tone of this and I'm so impressed that you kept it going all the way through. The longing and how broken Alex is basically bleeds through every line and it's gorgeous.
The fact that they're all using each other as the only way they know to carry on rings so true. And shower sex, as always, is hothothot.
Finally sixteen limbs?! Now you're definitely going to special hell and I WILL SEE YOU THERE!
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THANK YOU FOR STILL LOVING IT!
And yes, sixteen limbs. WHAT EVEN???? *high fives you*
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Alex chases her.
Addison catches them both.
Yes/Yes?
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(ALSO, your description of the Gotye concert sounds epic. Is there video?)
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How Meredith is so freaked and Alex is broken and Addison is manic. But they are together and THAT is the thing. THISSSSS! This is exactly what I was trying to say. I'm glad the Manic!Addison thing came across *wipes back of hand across forehead in universal sign for phew*
There area few vids on youtube, but they're just from iphones etc and the quality is awful :(
I have it etched into my brain though. Feel free to dive in there...!
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