Procrastination continued...

Oct 03, 2008 17:50



The Curves of your Lips (Rewrite History)

Part two, because LJ wouldn't allow me to post it all together.
Part Two )

fic, torchwood, writing

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liss76 October 4 2008, 02:19:26 UTC
Great fic -- I'd have liked to see it go on a bit longer, though. :) So much potential, weaving Forian through it like that. (One of my Top 10 All-Time Fave Books, btw. ;)) Good job! :D

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walktheboat October 4 2008, 02:53:53 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed! It's one of my fav books, too.

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silverkit_fic October 4 2008, 03:31:13 UTC
Wonderful story! I like how Ianto knows thinks about running, but in the end holds his ground.

The interaction between all three of them is great, and you snagged great bits from Oscar Wild to use.

Lovely story.

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walktheboat October 4 2008, 18:14:50 UTC
Thank you so much! *hugs*

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thrace_adams October 4 2008, 04:17:42 UTC
Oh woW! I totally didn't see that twist coming with the letter. Glad Ianto finally decided that his future wasn't set and that whatever comes will come and to just be happy in the now. Brilliant story!

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walktheboat October 4 2008, 19:11:51 UTC
I actually didn't know it was going to be his letter when I started. I'm happy you liked it!

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adjovi October 4 2008, 04:47:36 UTC
fantastic, this! what a great story--i loved the interweaving of lit into the plot, especially jack drawing parallels to his own immortality and ianto facing his own.

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walktheboat October 4 2008, 19:13:12 UTC
Thank you so much!

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kronette October 4 2008, 04:50:27 UTC
I'm absolutely floored by this. The characters are the characters we see on screen, their emotions are right, and the story is amazing. I choked up when Ianto read the full letter; talk about a stunning revelation. Lovely and wonderful and thank you for sharing this!

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walktheboat October 4 2008, 19:20:20 UTC
Aw, thanks so much! *blushes* Keeping characters true to themselves can be such a struggle.

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