Mistakes (2/3)

[wakingnitemarex]

It was requested, and I delivered. This is the followup to the Mavid rape-fic I wrote for the Kink Meme.

Title: Mistakes (2/3)
Author: wakingnitemarex / hatemetoday_xx
Rating: MC [Mature Content]
Pairing: None, really. Very light Cookstro that can be interpreted however the reader wishes.
Disclaimer: Not real, and I don't own any of the characters
Author's Notes: Yay! I

Comments

[fabbsam]

Oh bb this was so sad. Very well written, as usual. Mj made me mad though, with his comments about Jason...RAWR! And then I wanted to wrap Cookie up in my arms and just squish him, poor babe. Very good. I loved it :)

I love you, bb!

[wakingnitemarex]

Thank you, sweetie! <33
Yes! Grr. MJ is jealous so he bez hating on the Jason. D:
*lots of hugging and love for Cookie*

I love you, too!

[bloody_pickle]

I'm happy you didn't go the 'rape and then fall in love' rout and that David dosent just get over the rape. Michael needs to sit the fuck down and wait until Cook goes to him. I love protective Jason. Poor David D:

Beautiful story bb

[wakingnitemarex]

Thanks~
I dunno. I don't mind that in fic sometimes, but it's really just not as realistic. It's already a bit of a stretch that David doesn't entirely loath Michael.

Yeah. He's a tad impatient. And protective Jason is so very much love. *pokes him* ^.^

Thank you so much, hun. <33

[missepiphany]

oh I loved this.
I wanted to cuddle Jason and Cookie. Jason was just SO adorable and sweet. and overprotective Jason is made of win.

so you win in my book. (like we didn't already know that :P)

[wakingnitemarex]

Thank you, bb! <333

Mmm. Go right ahead. I'm sure they love cuddles. <3 Just don't make any sudden movements for David's sake.

Yay!! :D
Thank you again, hun. <3333

[loveisdance01]

This was really great. I loved David's characterization. and Jason's...him being protective is awesome. But MJ made me really mad in this. He was being really selfish...but hopefully they can make amends. Seriously beautiful job.

[wakingnitemarex]

Thank you so much, sweetheart. <333
I'm glad you like my characterizations. <3

Yes! MJ is being selfish and impatient, and just.. rawr. *bites him* Grr.

<33 ilu.

[loveisdance01]

haha you made me laugh hysterically with your bites him comment...it somehow reminded me of Jason being a kitten...lmao i have no idea why my mind went to that...but still MJ should be bitten really hard...asshole...in this story lmao.

ILU2!! <3

[hatemetoday_xx]

Yay! I like making people laugh hysterically. :D

I really am a biter, though. Ask my ex. And my best friends and sister for that matter. XD;

Kitten!Jason is so much wonderful. <33

Yes. 'in this fic'. I'm sure he's really a wonderful non-rapist guy. <3 I wouldn't mind sinking my teeth into that sometime. Nngh. <3

<333

[slashxcenton]

Oh yes! I've been so excited to read the continuation!

As usual, I love it, too much actually. I adore the way you portray MJ (I like him being impatient), and overprotective Jason is great...

Ahw, Cookie miss MJ too... Anyway, this is brilliant, and sad, and angsty (which is why I love it more).

Meh, want to hug Cookie...

[wakingnitemarex]

I hope it wasn't a disappointment!

You can never love a fic too much! (trust me. LOL!)

Thanks so much. I'm glad you like the way I write the boys. <33

Yes. Hugs for the Cookie. D:

[slashxcenton]

No it wasn't.

I love it too much, I was wanting to read this a lot of times... but school's evil (they keep me away from teh computer) :( .

Wait... there's part three...?!?! Oh, yes. That's too awesome.