Mistakes (1/3)

[wakingnitemarex]

Title: Mistakes
Author: wakingnitemarex / hatemetoday_xx
Rating: NC-17
Warning: this is a rape fic [don't look at me, someone else requested it], so obviously, there is rape. If this subject matter offends you, please avoid reading it. I don't want to start any drama.
Pairing: the flyboys/mavid
Disclaimer: Not real, never happened. Hopefully never will happen. Don't own the

Comments

[loveisdance01]

wow...that was brilliant. I can't even explain how much i loved this. Seriously speechless...brilliant.

[hatemetoday_xx]

Thank youu~!
That means so much to me. :D
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[guiltfeeder]

Actually, this is good. :)
Although... I think there's something wrong withe punctuations. *shifty eyes* But, well, it's up to you if you want to listen to me. >.>

Anyway, I really like the story. Is there... a continuation after this? Because it would be nice if there is. ^-^

And, yap. IT'S BRILLIANT! O.O

[hatemetoday_xx]

Thanks~ :)
haha. I'm horrible with punctuation. Especially commas. ^^;

I'm not sure. It's definitely open-ended enough to have one, but I already have a chaptered fic on the go, along with a bunch of one shots, so I don't know if I have the time/mental ability to continue with it. I might, though.

Thank you, again!! <3

[fabbsam]

this was really wonderful bb. sad, of course, but brilliantly written and so emotional. great job babe.

[hatemetoday_xx]

Thank you, sweetheart.
Yes, definitely sad. D: *hugs David*

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[madiownsyou]

Go Jason.

He shoulda hit beat the crap outta Michael though.

haha.

I like it. XD

[hatemetoday_xx]

Jason is the man.
xD;

Mmm. Yeah. He should've lol. But I'm pretty sure Michael is stronger, and would've fought back eventually. D:

Thanks <3

[insanityxspeaks]

Um, so this killed me. And then I found out there was a WHOLE 'NOTHER PART THAT I HAD NO IDEA ABOUT! *gasp* :O So, I came back to life. And read it. And died again.

YOU AMAZE ME. I tell you that everytime you write something, but it's only 'cause it's true and I WANT YOU TO BELIEVE IT, BB.

"I'll do whatever I want, Cook. And tonight, that's you."
^^Brilliance. Pure, evil!Mikey brilliance.

The moans falling from his lips are a terrible contrast from the whimpers of pain David is making.
^^ *cries* *stops crying* *PUNCHES MJ. RAWR.*

And then...the part I didn't even know about! :O
Dayum. Jason...you go, girl. That...that is amazing. I think that's the first time I've ever seen a true angry!Jason. And then Michael SLAPPED HIM. And then I wanted to jump in and tackle him RAWR!! Not cool. And then...*wibble* POOR COOKIE! Oh GAWD this was so heartbreaking yet completely awesome. *sighs* I'm not gonna beg you for a sequel, 'cause I know you've got a lot goin' on *coughcough* JASON/SIMON *coughcough* but y'know...it would be cool :D

[hatemetoday_xx]

*gasp* The slash-fic serial killer has struck again! :O
yay for extra surprises! <33

YOU AMAZE ME, TOO! And, seriously hun, you are just too sweet! :D I love you! <33

:D That's my favorite line [from my parts], so I'm really glad you pointed it out. :D!

;; *hugs David whilst glaring at MJ*

LMAO! "You go, girl". I love you more than ever. LOL!
I think angry!Jason would actually be rather terrifying. Could you imagine if that boy snapped? Oh man..
I was writing that scene in Chem/Geo and I was just like "Jaaaaysooonnn! D:"

Maybe someday. :]
*coughs!*It's in the works, bb! I promise.*restrains from teasing you again*

*cries from too much happy* *clings*
I love you, sweetheart! <333333333

[insanityxspeaks]

LOLZZZZZ fuck yes :]]]

*hugglesnuggle* ILY TOO! <333

HAHA...that was the very first thing that popped into my head when I read the part with the angry!Jason. It was quite amusing <3 And dear God. Totally agree. The day Jason snaps is the day the sky falls 'cause that's got to be a lot of anger/frustation under that thick shell of laid-back/chill. Don't know how bb keeps it all inside [but that's my serious case of anger management talking. rawr.]

Maybe someday. :]
^^OoOoOh!! That reminds me of your "Someday" fic! *runs to re-read.* I told you I'm stalking you.

*more hugglesnuggle*
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[hatemetoday_xx]

;P

*cuddle!*ILYM! <33

Haha. Too perfect.
Yeah. It's always the too-chill kids you need to keep your eyes on. I pity the fool who makes him snap.

haha! don't read it all in one sitting. ;P
Chapter 9 is about half-done, too, so, yay! :D

I feel honnored to have so many stalkers.
Is that healthy? xD;

*snuggling~*
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