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wah_keetcha

Why You?

Jul 30, 2009 17:25

Title: Why You?

Rating: T (swears)

Summary: Eliot and Nate have a late night conversation after Eliot returns from watching the Marshall as he removed Randy from his abusive home.

Author Note: So, that episode was awesome, waaay better than the Tap-out Job I think. I really want to see if this will be a recurring thing. (probably not since they ( Read more... )

Comments 7

kari_hermione July 30 2009, 21:40:13 UTC

I liked this. I really wish something like this had been in the episode. Thanks!

hunters_retreat July 30 2009, 22:08:01 UTC

I really liked this piece! I liked the way Nate gently guided him into revealing himself and how Eliot was still so guarded the whole time. I love the way Nate assures him that he's a good man.

cheyenne852 July 30 2009, 23:09:52 UTC

Excellent. I wish something like this had been in the episode as well.

numb3r12 July 31 2009, 01:08:48 UTC

aww, really liked this. I would have loved tp have seen something like this on the show. good job

lucdarling July 31 2009, 03:59:35 UTC

I hope Eliot can one day see that he is a good person. but I'm glad Nate can recognize it.

This was perfect, with Nate gently coaxing the story out of Eliot but not pushing too hard. & those blue eyes of Kane's totally tell what he's feeling. (the temper is just a bonus gauge.) You did good capturing that with the descriptions. I have a feeling abused!Eliot is going to be canon at some point; the signs are all pointing to it.