Fic: All Clear (Fleischerverse)

[wabbitseason]

Title: All Clear
Author: wabbitseason
Claim: Fleischer Superman
Characters: Clark Kent, Lois Lane, Perry White
Rating: G
Word Count: 473 words
Prompt: 9. Writer's Choice
Summary: August 14, 1945. V-J Day. The war is over.
Disclaimer: Don't own them.
Author's Notes: I originally came up with this idea for dcu_freeforall's "Peace Day" challenge, but my laptop crashed, so I

Comments

[stargateguy]

Fleischer would be proud. I know I am. This vignette is spot-on, both in character and in feel of the era. You've read my rantings about how the "pros" go about things today, so you know I don't say that lightly. Well done.

[mithen]

Oh, this is awesome! I love Lois's mix of affection, slight contempt, and self-promotion.

That Clark, with all his strength and speed, was declared 4-F because of a mistake on an eye exam, grated on the reporter's nerves.

That's right, doesn't he accidentally read the eye chart in the next room? ROFL. Clark as a patriot can be jarring to me, but I think you did a wonderful job of making him caring and humane at the same time.

The general image of the two of them leaning on the windowsill watching the crowds is perfect, I can so see the Fleischer Lois and Clark there.