Decision 2020

Dec 15, 2010 20:38

And another thing: for a good nine-tenths of their campaign, they were all flash and no substance. It was strictly for satirical purposes, to make fun of the way the real candidates’ campaigns were more flash than substance. They hadn’t gotten serious until September, and even then, their aim hadn’t been to win, it had been inflict damage.

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knightsblack December 16 2010, 02:39:37 UTC
Jon stared. “Dude,” he managed after a moment. “Our mascot’s a unicorn.”

The audience laughed again, and just as it was dying down, Fred inquired “I thought it was a Pegasus?”

The audience started up again, nearly drowning out Jon’s retort of “It has a horn!”

“And wings,” Fred reminded him.

“So it’s like a cross between the two,” Jon said.

“Like a peggycorn?” Fred suggested.

I know, broken record, but god, do I love the accurate detail such as this that you portray. That was great, as was Jon and Stephen's conversation (and Stephen's texts :D). Interested to find out how the attempted shooting will be solved as well.

And the thought of Jon losing that lovely fluffiness of hair just makes me sad.

You want something that works; you want something that isn’t going to trample on people’s right with due cause and due process, something that isn’t going to stand on a critical issue for the sake political posturing, or tolerate such behavior.*Looks up at sky* Seriously, is this too much to ask for ( ... )

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w_thit December 20 2010, 01:00:44 UTC
A lot of writing this fic is apply Murphy's Law to the plot. Okay, so they're going to have a unicorn with wings as their mascot. How can this be confused for something serious?

Jon's not completely bald yet, but he's on his way.

Competent governments don't seem to exist these days.:( Thanks for reading!

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megantracey December 16 2010, 02:58:33 UTC
This is so great! The details, the dialogue, the new characters added. I just love it.

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w_thit December 20 2010, 01:00:57 UTC
Thank you!

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seldomnite December 16 2010, 03:49:46 UTC
The decrepit jokes.

The vibrator joke... I cried.

And I'm always thinking of the game "Robot Unicorn Attack" when they mention the Unicorn.

Fantastic stuff. <3

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w_thit December 20 2010, 01:02:02 UTC
ALWAYS I WANNA BE~ WITH YOU, MAKE BELIEVE~ WITH YOU, AND LIVE IN HARMONY, HARMONY, OH LOVE~!

Ahem. Yeah. Thanks for reading!

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;aehfglesrh...OMFG! sailoralgol December 16 2010, 04:11:07 UTC
more...need more... epic awesomeness... need more!

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Re: ;aehfglesrh...OMFG! w_thit December 20 2010, 01:02:21 UTC
The next part is up now. Thanks for commenting!

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obsindian December 16 2010, 04:22:00 UTC
OMG! ANOTHER CHAPTER!

Peggycorn FTW. Excellent chapter, want more! I adore Jon and Stephen's characterizations. The story is just begging to be read. Write, write, write! Because I'm already considering proposing.

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w_thit December 20 2010, 01:02:42 UTC
Thank you so much! The next part is up now.

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