Tenipuri - NiouYagyuu

[w175n57]

wOOt 2:46 PM. Yesh. I'm moving and rewriting old things from FFnet to here, so here's something I wrote last Christmas which I just completely killed. It's 3AM, break please?

Title: White Christmas
Pairing: NiouYagyuu
Rating: R, just because
Comments: Uh, yeah, bad analogies. ^_^;; And forgive any insults, I like Christmas, I just felt like

Comments

[ruji]

read this on FF.net before... and this one is better. love the angst, though i hate it at the same time. poor Niou... and poor Yukimura! oh no you've named him Sickly. aa but i guess that's apt. you know after i read it the first time, for a period of time i would get all teary when i heard this song. and i wouldn't mind if it still had such an effect on me. White Christmas has officially become a sad christmas song. and i like it. ^^

[w175n57]

Oh, your icon. I can't remember if I oogled at it before, but it's really pretty. ^_^

Heh, I know. I was in a bad-ish mood when I rewrote this, so I was being sort of mean to my chars and Yuki ended up as Sickly. ^_^;; Thanks for your sweet comments~ =)

[arctic_dragon]

*sniffle*
Sooo sad.
I love the ending.
Beautifully haunting.
Cheers

[w175n57]

Thanks, hope the angst wasn't too heavy ^_^;;~

[sublimeparadigm]

Painful, beautiful, and very poignant. I feel like my heart just broke. Very nice work.

[w175n57]

=) Thanks, I was hoping the rewrite would touch like that. Thanks for reading&commenting~

[phantomfangx]

Very touching story. It's like listening to the breeze at night...makes you shiver, but enjoyable all the same.

[w175n57]

>P Are you being serious, or really?

btw - your icon is amusing. For this one you'd need a fun font - something more like Comic Sans MS. >D

Thanks for reading and commenting, either way. XD We'll convert you yet.

[vitiates]

It's, touching, and sad. Bitter yet sweet. Close yet far.