Full Metal Alchemist (Ed/Al, Mother)

[w175n57]

on a writer's block roll, as weird as that may sound. fma, hehe. more dialogue than usual, but the style i started out with didn't really allow for char introspect. i still suck. :cries: written for fic_on_demand.

title: Shell
pairing: faint ed/al, if you squint
rating: pg
notes: she asks for light-hearted. i made a non-angst ending? XD;; oops.

Comments

[rosehiptea]

I liked that very much. It's touching and very in character.

[w175n57]

=) thank you. fma's not one of my frequent fandoms, so it's nice to hear i didn't maul the characters. thanks for reading&commenting ♥

[meritjubet]

It was emotionally odd, sad but sweet at the same time. New awareness almost. I liked it but.

[w175n57]

I liked it but.

^_^;; was there supposed to be something after that? either way, i'm glad you enjoyed the piece, however much. i tried to tone down the angst, which might've accounted for some of the emotionally odd tone. ._. hehe oops. thanks for reading&commenting~

[meritjubet]

Sorry for the late reply, I've been away for a week. I just saying that I liked it, but I didn't really know how to describe my liking for it.

[anonymous]

heyy I really liked it! yes, I was half expecting some fushi-tezuka, romance-based, Japanese-school-setting storyline intertwined with the lines to some song I didn't know and ending with the classic one word punchline.

but I really liked this one! =)

[w175n57]

fuu.

i don't write that much tezufuji romance.

it's usually angst.

i'm insulted!

sort of.

[w175n57]

hehe. fma fluff? ._. the creators make it waaaay to easy to write fma angst. like how kubotite makes it way too easy to write bleach angst. who can resist when everyone has such a sadsad past? XD;;

[allyouhaveisme]

came here for saiyuki fic, saw this and had to read - god, this was so beautiful it tore my heart out through my throat
i know this is like, 12.5 years after this was written but.... thank you for writing this. the imagery was breathtaking. xo