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Sudden and Complicated 15

Dec 28, 2008 23:24

Title: Sudden and Complicated
Chapter: 15. Or Chapter 1 of Part 2 xD
Author: Vy (that's me)
Genre: Romantic Comedy
Fandom: HSJ
Pairing: Arioka Daiki x OC x Okamoto Keito x Inoo Kei
Summary: Now that they've all gotten to know each other, the boys plan a little Christmas party for their new foreign friend. But who wouldve thought things would get this ( Read more... )

comedy, original character, fanfic, romance, inoo kei, sudden and complicated, okamoto keito, arioka daiki

Comments 80

wennxinn December 29 2008, 14:35:49 UTC

*throws bricks at Hikaru*

Like I said. Idiot.

And awwww, Keito. Awwww, Inoo. AWWWWW, DAIKI.

I think you've already forgotten about the Eri-Milan story we were supposed to do lol.

vydinh616 December 29 2008, 17:20:25 UTC

I still remembered it. But I never got your email, and I NEEDED to have this chapter uploaded, since it's been forever since the next part was up.

xD Hikaru is cute as an idiot, he makes me laugh.
Seems like you really want Daiki to be with Milan. ^^

wennxinn December 29 2008, 18:18:42 UTC

Nah, I would want Milan with Keito instead. Keito, sigh. He needs love.

Daiki can be a single for all his life. I would still think he's cute.

Oh, I'm sorry. Yahoo lags me like orz. So, I haven't been on it for a long time. I finished some parts of it though.

vydinh616 December 29 2008, 18:25:20 UTC

xD Yea, Keito does need love. But I think all three of them do. Daiki because he judges himself too much (the whole height things), Keito and Inoo both dont get enough attention as well. So I still dont know. >.<''

Okay, I'll wait for the fiction. Then i can work my way around it for the next chapter. But have it to me soon okay? Once school starts again, I have to have a schedule worked out for posts.

yamada_love December 29 2008, 19:52:46 UTC

*shoots Hikaru*
Ahhh! I didn't mean that!!!

But still, BAKA!!!

Any who, Keito ♥♥♥, Inoo ♥♥♥, Daiki ♥♥♥♥

Okay, now for some delayed flailing ^^
KGSEKUGKDUHGKJSDHFKUDHSKUSDGKUSDGK!!!!!

vydinh616 December 29 2008, 20:05:53 UTC

hahahaha, Hikaru's an idiot, we all agree on that.
But he's really good at helping scenes move along.

yamada_love December 30 2008, 02:58:18 UTC

That is true.

That's pretty much Hikaru's role in my fic xDD

Ugh, I STILL have writers block >__

vydinh616 December 30 2008, 03:31:38 UTC

hahaha, still not gone yet?
i cant really help. when I have writers block, i just roam away from it. dont know if that can help you though. xD

tokidoki_sama December 29 2008, 23:33:36 UTC

Aww...so cute!!!
Hikaru you little nasty!!! LOL I love him!!!
This is awesome! Thanks for sharing!!!

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vydinh616 December 30 2008, 16:30:10 UTC

xD Chinen is really too cute. Too much like a child though. ^^
Inoo on sugar was extremely strange, but I had to make him weirder than his sugar high in Mayonaka making (points to Inoo flirting with Yabu). xP Hikaru really helps move the story along easily. I always have a hard time doing scenes like those because I have no idea how to make it happen. Just stick Hikaru in, and it's easy. orz Ah, I'll read it now!

bea_chan22 December 30 2008, 15:48:28 UTC

I just read the ffic. The plot was very nice considering I miss memberxOC fics a lot. All I can see were shounen-ai.

I hope you can update it more. Advanced happy new year. :)

vydinh616 December 30 2008, 16:23:24 UTC

you just read all 15 chapters? that was fast. glad you liked it. i'm not a huge fan up shounen-ai so that's what drives me to write OC fictions. I'll start updating the story once weekly as soon as school starts again. Advanced New Years to you too~