First Fic Posting - Go easy on me.

Dec 26, 2008 19:58


Authors Notes: I've been lurking around LJ for a long time, enjoying the brilliance of all the wonderful writers. I've finally gathered up my courage and decided to post something I've written. I hope you like it. And if you don't, I hope you can take a moment to tell me why so I can improve.  All comments welcome; con/crit needed. Well *gulp* here ( Read more... )

mpreg, h/d, established relationship

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enchanted_jae December 28 2008, 08:53:26 UTC
That's so lovely. Touching.

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vwalk December 28 2008, 18:28:30 UTC
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. I'm a huge fan of your work *giggles like a schoolgirl* :D Thank you for taking the time to comment.

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rospberry January 8 2009, 20:16:45 UTC
That's a very lovely piece of writing: soft and loving without being overdone. Mpreg generally isn't my thing - unless it's done really well - and so the fact I enjoyed this is a HUGE compliment to your writing!
Look forward to more!

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vwalk January 8 2009, 21:42:46 UTC
*blushes again* Thanks for reading - and taking the time to comment. I'm glad you liked it, despite the mpreg.
That was my first work and even now I can see where I'd change things. I have another (not mpreg) that I'll be posting soon. Take a look and let me know what you think if you get a chance.

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vwalk January 15 2009, 15:33:28 UTC
I actually wanted to leave the identities up to the reader. I'm glad that the ambiguous nature wasn't irritating.

Thank you for taking the time to comment. It took me a looonnnnnggg time to muster enough courage to post my work. Great reviews keep me motivated to keep doing so.

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