Ame no hi wa ureshii kedo no sankyuu

Jan 08, 2007 18:21

ZOMG! I wrote!? Again?! ...Yes, believe it or not... (BELIEVE IT! *narf*)

Ame no Hi wa Ureshii
Length: One-Shot
Rating: G
Genre: General/Romance
Warning(s): Shounen-ai impliments
Character(s): Marth, Roy, Zelda, Peach
Pairing(s): Hinted Marth x Roy
Summary: The weather's great isn't it? For Marth it is, not so much for Roy.
Author's Notes: ... ( Read more... )

fanfic: smash brothers, ssbm

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vulpixi_misa January 9 2007, 04:27:58 UTC
...I don't know actually... That's for you to find out... Ja ja. XD

I hate rain. I'd rather it snow even though I hate the cold. ...And ice is fun, but not if you're the one slipping and falling on it. -_-'...

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vulpixi_misa January 9 2007, 20:22:13 UTC
Like I said, I don't know. Go ask Marff or something.

Ah, ew, black slush. X[

Haha! XD

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hasukerz January 9 2007, 05:18:48 UTC
Like, omigosh! *fangirls* Squee~! X3

Indeed, that was very lovely. The dancing was beautiful. (If only Roy could enjoy it more, even a little. *huff*) I'm astounded by how you write subtleness. It seems to be your secret technique for a flawless fluffy one-shot. Oh, and the wordings. I'm suffering from literary inferiority. Oh, woe.

Roy and Marth's (as well as the other SSBM characters) characterizations make me fear and cower... or just utterly confused. ^^; I think you've written them quite well. I very much enjoy rainy days... indoors, mostly. And yes, I've realized "rain" and "pleasant," for you to use within the same sentence (Of course, not the "is not" between them), struck as irregular.

I can't understand why you haven't been posting on FF.net! >_< Spread the love! (The SSBM section doesn't know what it's missing! *snickers*)

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vulpixi_misa January 9 2007, 20:27:17 UTC
Oh please, how "inferior" can you be using things like "astounded" and "literary inferiority". Psh. *slapus* Flawless?! You must be reading some other fluffy fic. Some dance that was, I barely wrote any steps... I likes me subtleness though.

*stabus rain*

There are some things that were not meant for human eyes. ...Or just eyes that I don't want on my literature. ...I have my reasons... ...Oh shit. ...I just realized I never posted shounen-ai on FF.net. ... ZOMG! *runs over and postes somefing*

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hasukerz January 11 2007, 02:04:14 UTC
Haha, slapus? Um, I guess I'm trying too hard. Wait, "astounded" is a word, right? I'm confusing it with "astonished." (See! Misa is with stupid.) Uh... Last I checked, the fic I was reading was called "Ame no Hi wa Ureshii." ^^ A dance is a dance, even if it involves just a hop. (...off a bridge) Well, I in contrast will probably only be good for writing things clear, obvious, with no surprise at all. Doesn't that sound fun? u_u

Gasp...us! You lied! You lied to the rain! Say sorry!

Um, my YohRen gift fic doesn't count? ^^ Hurray, another review to write.

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vulpixi_misa January 11 2007, 02:29:08 UTC
*slappus again* Yes it is a word. Stop make me look good. *slappus*

*slappus rain* I apologize rain. *slaps it again*

Well... ...*scratches head* Um... Not really... >_>

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hasukerz January 11 2007, 04:25:12 UTC
Um... okay. Whatever you say, dude.

I thought it was "slap-eth." ^^;

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