Turn Toward Home (F/K, G)

[vsee]

Title: Turn Toward Home

Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski

Rating: Innocuous, with vague reference to sex.

Length: ~3800 words

Summary: "Ray thinks this probably isn't how they should be spending the early evening of their first Valentine's Day together."

Author's Notes: Many thanks to spuffyduds for a gentle and timely beta

Comments

[kill_claudio]

Oh. Oh! This is just the perfect story! Fandom is goign to have to plot to kidnap you and hide you somewhere so that you spend all your time writing, because this is gorgeous. I love all the subtle little criticisms of Valentine's Day (commercialised, saccharine and heteronormative, grrrr) and Fraser and Ray's own way of saying 'I love you' is so much sweeter and more meaningful. The way Ray kisses Fraser's hand at the end made me all *wibble*. And I want to second (or third) what everyone else said, it was all so vivid, and I could smell the tangerines with Ray, and I got totally sucked into the story.

[vsee]

I'm so glad the story worked for you, KC. I hope I will have many chances to write more.

[myriad69]

Oh, this is so incredibly sweet, and I just adore Ray's voice in this! Really wonderful, and a perfect Valentine's Day (even a few days later) treat for everyone!

[vsee]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

[vsee]

Thank you!

[malnpudl]

This made me infinitely happy. So perfectly them. So very much love.

[vsee]

Mal, I am delighted that you liked it. Thanks for reading.

[green_grrl]

Mmmm, I love Ray's worries melting away into an epiphany. Lovely!

For your strange, whittle-it-yourself, whatever-they-were of three months.

Perfect turn of phrase for a relationship involving Fraser. ;-)

[vsee]

Thank you, GG. This was really fun to write.