haha, yeah. I totally had to go through the scene a lot switching back and forth as to who would be top. In the end YB just worked better since he could support GD on the wall with his muscular-ness and since GD weighs about eight pounds.
I'm really really happy that you enjoyed it!!! This is my way of repaying your for all the great times I've had reading your stories and for all the inspiration I've gotten from them for my own fics. <3
But I have to admit the ending was such pure win, it made me totally forget what I liked about the rest of the fic. lmao Then there was a knock on the door of the closet and Daesung’s voice drifted in. “Um…Hyungs, the stylist Noonas said if you’re done that you need to come out so they can clean you up. We’re on in fifteen minutes.” That line in particular killed me~
One thing, though. "Nobody else can ever by you.” YoungBae said seriously. He stroked JiYong’s cheek as lightly kissed him." <--- I think you meant Nobody else can ever but you & as he lightly kissed him.
JiYong smiled and then laughed, “YoungBae, nobody can deliver such cheesy lines in real life and mean it half as sincerely as you.” <-- Aww. So true. :3
“Oh the cheese YoungBae, so much cheese.” <--- lol That was all win! :)
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In the end YB just worked better since he could support GD on the wall with his muscular-ness and since GD weighs about eight pounds.
I'm really really happy that you enjoyed it!!!
This is my way of repaying your for all the great times I've had reading your stories and for all the inspiration I've gotten from them for my own fics. <3
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But I have to admit the ending was such pure win, it made me totally forget what I liked about the rest of the fic. lmao
Then there was a knock on the door of the closet and Daesung’s voice drifted in. “Um…Hyungs, the stylist Noonas said if you’re done that you need to come out so they can clean you up. We’re on in fifteen minutes.”
That line in particular killed me~
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I'm glad you liked the ending, i'm always worried about whether they finish well or not.
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One thing, though. "Nobody else can ever by you.” YoungBae said seriously. He stroked JiYong’s cheek as lightly kissed him." <--- I think you meant Nobody else can ever but you & as he lightly kissed him.
JiYong smiled and then laughed, “YoungBae, nobody can deliver such cheesy lines in real life and mean it half as sincerely as you.” <-- Aww. So true. :3
“Oh the cheese YoungBae, so much cheese.” <--- lol That was all win! :)
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i'm glad you liked it.
^^; i should really check my grammar.
I actually meant
"Nobody else can ever be you."....cheek and lightly kissed him.
my bad!
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^ That line was total win.
“And by the way, you guys are gross.” Seungri added.
^ This literally made me giggle out loud. Seungri's just so cute. <3
Great fic~
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Thanks for reading!
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That line was my favourite ever.
This was a nice read that made me smile.
Nice jobbb <3.
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I'm glad you liked it!
lol! This icon kinda matches yours, but sadly is not TOP.
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